[nanamai] Taking The Long Way Home

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Inspired by Nanase's solo mv Tsuzuku. A Nanamai heavily centered drama. Written mostly from Nanase's  prespective, narating events which alternates  between flashbacks and the present time. A lot of angst and sadness, frankly speaking this story is just pure pain on a computer screen.
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corinneniix #1
just found the rest of this on wattpad, so excited to read them all!
just that the story rly is just so sad how did you write this omg...
corinneniix #2
Chapter 3: im rereading this and i couldn't help but leave another comment...

i come back to this fic once in a while because its too beautiful. only to torture myself because its too tragic.

i really really appreciate the beautiful imagery in your writing, i can literally see them, and i love the beautiful description like of the television in chapter 1 and of maiyan's face in this chapter. you have such a good flair for words.

this story is really too beautiful, the love between nanamai is so beautiful i wish it were real but at the same time i don't want mai dying...

ill visit this fic again sometime. hopefully i wont leave another pointless comment then... hahaha
corinneniix #3
Chapter 3: i only found this now. this... really is pure pain on a screen.

you write so well, the emotions are well conveyed and so many things between the lines make the story so beautiful. such tragedy is so painful but can be made beautiful...

i love your portrayal of nanase as a mother too. been watching her latest drama hot mama recently so it caught my attention.

don't know if you're going to continue writing this but if you are i'll be reading.

thank you for this beautiful but tragic nanamai story
DarkMusings #4
Chapter 3: Great story so far! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
allysara #5
Chapter 3: my God..this is such a beautiful writing.T_T you have warn us of angst but damn..the feeeeelsss.i love how the story was not rush, but have pace and how even when we are ready to be hurt, the struggle to keep on reading is amazing.thank you for writing such a beautiful story.i really love how you portray Maiyan here.my poor heart...
p/s: i hope you continue writing to the end.
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