Phlegmatic

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Description

When she buried her whole world at ten, she thought she was really all alone. Apparently, she missed one. The ghost of a girl that constantly taunts her.



phleg·mat·ic (fleɡˈmadik)

adjective

  1. (of a person) having an unemotional and stolidly calm disposition.

Foreword

My SECOND entry for: Can You Feel It? Halloween Mini-Contest!

Prompt #22 // I'll Be There by Taeyang

"I am no longer alive, but I still observe you. I want you near me. Why don't you join me? You only need to stop breathing."

| Story Status: October 8, 2018 - October 16, 2018 |

Winning entry at Can You Feel It? Halloween Mini-Contest! Yayyy~

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dieukyungsoo
#1
Chapter 1: woah this gave me chills!! not a good idea to read right before sleep haha I rely enjoyed this!! the writing was amazing and everything was so vivid, from the way jiae's spirit looked to the home she was in. thank you for writing this!
mirandaskpop
#2
and it won! whoa! gratz!
mirandaskpop
#3
A Yoo Jiae story! O:
DGNA_Forever
#4
Chapter 1: I like how this story transformed and loved the end result. The idea of it being her own reflection was fascinating, and brought back memories or Infinite's The Eye video. I really liked the way she was with the little boy and the ending was great. Thank you for giving me something that would make my skin crawl, yet wondering what the end result would be. I loved it♡.
DGNA_Forever
#5
Thus sounds creepy and cool, which will be perfect foe Halloween. Good luck!