Never thought it Could Happen to Me

Description

Taehyung never thought it would happen to him. The used-to-be future clan leader, in an alley way. 

Then an angel came, an angel named Jungkook.

Taehyung will do whatever it takes to repay him.

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Bubbaboo #1
Chapter 12: aww, thank you anyways! love you too authornim
Skyful_Poof
#2
Chapter 12: Aww...
Okay, I understand.
Thanks for the story, though. I really loved it <333
PCYplusBBH
#3
Chapter 12: Damn, a taste of my own medicine T-T
ashkhen #4
Chapter 11: Finished reading all the chapters on here and I'm actually excited that Vkook reunited again and love each other.....Jungkook being taken away wasn't great for Tae and went to look for him out on his own.....Both of them are safe and now they need to make sure the other guys get arrested.....The gang needs to know what happened
Skyful_Poof
#5
Chapter 11: Oh God, I'm so glad he's okay now... I hope he heals soon! >.<
Mewlrose #6
I'm intrigued that you decided to write about Taehyung getting , or almost getting , in the first chapter, but never mention it again. People who do get faced with those kinds of situations don't just go about their daily lives without being affected by it. I just think that you're using Taehyung's scenario as an excuse for Taehyung and Jungkook to meet. Also, I see that you have a lot of grammar mistakes (confusing your with you're and vice versa) and your fic is heavy with dialogue and has almost no description. I think you have a lot of potential with this fic, but you can kick it up a notch. Also, this is the Internet. You will get criticism eventually, and you should learn how to take it.
Skyful_Poof
#7
Chapter 10: Oh my God, what?!?
Poor Jungkook! Oh, I wonder who those men are! Are they someone against Taehyung's group or something?
T.T
I'm so curious and excited about this! <3
PCYplusBBH
#8
Chapter 10: you really just said yeet to my heart didn't you
PCYplusBBH
#9
Chapter 9: my poor taehyungie T-T at least he has jungoo T-T
Skyful_Poof
#10
Chapter 9: Ooo~ Training, huh? Well, to me it sounds like they're gonna have a hard time! Also, I really feed sad about Tae's father now :/