Chapter 1: So far I’m liking this and it’s cute seeing how Sakura and Kaeun interact. However some sentences sound a bit awkward but not too noticeable. You mentioned how Sakura figured out the name of Miyu’s gf but then you mentioned how Sakura was shocked at Miyu being gay? Or did you mean that Sakura didn’t think they were serious as a couple (that maybe her gf was a “phase/experiment”?) I am reading this before sleeping so my brain could just be off lol I find it cute how they both like each other and how quick Sakura was to get jealous with oblivious Kaeun, but you can tell Kaeun cares bc she immediately went after her to the bar. I love how in the end “shy” Sakura was the one to share her feelings towards Kaeun and was finally able to resolve their problem (and thank god she didn’t sleep with Jurina!)
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