Chapter 1: Wow, that was a very entertaining story. I am glad I found your story! I saw regzlim commented on it too! Both of you are turning out to be my favorite Song Ji Hyo fanfic writers! Hope to read more stories from you!

Short and sweet. Well, sorta. More like y at times. Haha, but I digress.
"You would think he knows about Ji Hyo's temper if her sleep is interrupted." That line made me chuckle. She really is a well-known sleepyhead. I kinda like how in just that one sentence, you were able to convey a part of In Sung's concern for Ji Hyo while interjecting humour into the story. Good one!

Maybe you could have elaborated a bit on why she didn't want to go back to her own place but to In Sung's instead? Was it loneliness she was feeling? Or she missed her boyfriend(I'm just assuming in this story he is her boyfriend, and not just a random booty call.) Because as you mentioned, she had hardly spent time at her own place. But we as readers haven't been privy to the reason why.

I also liked how Ji Hyo attempted to be all sultry and seductive. Heck, I wouldn't mind having Song Ji Hyo turn up at my apartment acting all seductive. And I'm sure many others agree. lol. I don't quite get what you mean when you say, she flipped her imaginary hair from side to side. To me that sounded a little like she had no hair? Haha, so she had imaginary hair?

I kinda like how you implied that she had been staying there for some time by having In Sung hand her a pair of purple house slippers naturally. Purple phone, purple slippers - He noticed her favourite colour perhaps?

I really like the ending with all 4 of them at the table. It felt like Ji Hyo is totally included into In Sung's inner circle. And that really is the case in strong relationships with the other halves being intertwined in each other's lives and being accepted as "family". It was truly heartwarming to read that. Haha and In Sung gave me a Kim Jong Kook vibe at the end. Taking away the bar of chocolate from her and chiding her for an unhealthy lifestyle. Awesome!

Can't wait to read more from you! Love it!

Chapter 1: Is it completed?

Chapter 1: Completed??

Chapter 1: love how jihyo so at ease wf all of them .... wana hear they call her hyungsoonim

Hmmm intriguing... I've subscribed and am looking forward to reading the next chapter!