01: New Neighbor

As You Wish
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01: new neighbor

 

The cut on Mingyu’s palm stopped hurting hours ago, but it is just now when emerges from a dark alleyway and under a streetlight that he notices the bruise surrounding the broken skin. A fog of hazy purple surrounds the crimson river on his palm and throbs and throbs. If he looks closely, he swears he can see his own heartbeat. Perhaps his own heart in his blood. Red vines twisting with blue veins—forests of life that he wants dead. Maybe he can throw his heart against a car window and hope it ends in stillness.

 

He takes a deep breath and regrets it. The air tastes like dirt, and the stolen alcohol he stole threatens to make a second appearance. His hand throbs again, but he bites his lip and forces himself to open the door to his apartment building.

 

It smells like smoke in the lobby, but it’s better than the trash on the streets. The carpet is old, muddy, and fraying in places, but it feels like heaven as opposed to stepping in wet gum fresh out of a passerby’s mouth. Mingyu steps over a strange area on the carpet, and he tumbles over. He makes the mistake of using both hands to stop himself because his injured palm—his right one—makes direct contact with the ground, and an explosion of pain travels up his arm and into his heart.

 

His heart. Mingyu doesn’t know why it hurts there, because what ing heart? But it does.

 

Very carefully, on shaky legs, Mingyu rises and looks behind him to see where his tripped, but he finds nothing but inch after inch of old carpet.

 

He punches the button for the elevator with his left hand, stumbles in, and presses the 11th button for the 11th floor. Because the elevator is disgusting and old, it takes a few moments and ominous creaks before it actually starts to move. Each sound that the elevator makes startles Mingyu. Every time he uses this cursed elevator, it conducts a symphony written from nightmares. Sometimes he has dreams of the elevator breaking down and killing him. What’s scarier is that sometimes, he becomes angry that the dream isn’t real.

 

The 11th floor is not the last floor of the building, but it is the most hazardous and neglected that it might as well be. Aside from him, there are on

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raelio
#1
i'm still in an asianfanfic reading lump because of this. it has been what, a very long time. this raised my standards i can't even find new ones to read.
danielaerimee #2
Chapter 7: Thank you, this is added to my favorites.
parkminjeen
#3
Chapter 7: It’s unusual for me to read stories with angst plot but gosh this is one of the exemptions :’( I’m happy that Mingyu is taking small steps to move on. I can’t help but overthink about that kid. I immediately thought that he could be the kid that Junmyeon was talking about that his wife have outside, so in a way the mother and son is running away just like what most tenants in that building does. And then, the possibility that he’s Mingyu’s son considering that he has slight tan skin. But oh well I guess I’m just overthinking.
parkminjeen
#4
Chapter 3: Okay the last part of this chapter made me cry and feeling hella sad...
raelio
#5
I've read this, but they way I only subscribed to this now? I spent thirty damn minutes looking for this story because I just remembered the plot and not the characters TT_TT rereading this because in the mood to cry.
FanGirl619
#6
Chapter 7: With depression mentioned in this story... the story hits me close to home and I really enjoy your storyline
cheonchoni
#7
Chapter 7: wait so he will never know that he has a child?? I am sad but the ending is so perfect...he should be happy and start a new life :')
nicorobin
#8
Chapter 7: I stay up until 3am reading this, and then I continue in the morning
I have a lot of emotions reading this, but now I don't know what to say
The ending left me feeling both disappointed and satisfied
I'm used to reading happy ending fics (especially fanfics) where everything tied up nicely, exactly what the reader would expect since the beginning, so reading the ending I was like??? WHAT? That's it??? BUT? HOW? WHY?
In a way it's actually a happy ending, the four best friends are making their dreams come true (I think?), Mingyu is rich, he has a loving girlfriend, and he finally moves on-- but no explanation about Irene at all (it's implied, but that's the thing, we could be wrong, maybe Junmyeon isn't Irene's husband, maybe the kid isn't Mingyu's, maybe it's not Irene and their son who rents Irene's old place -- but I read the synopsis of In The Mood of Love, so it's definitely Irene)
YET, I feel this is realistic, because life isn't about closure and explanations, life moves on, and this writing is just that

I love every interactions, Mingyu/Dean, Mingyu/Wonwoo/Vernon/Seungcheol, esp Mingyu/Irene, how their relationship develops is just so, so sweet. I cried when Mingyu break down about missing his mom

It's unfortunate that we never get to know what Mingyu's movie is about - since it's in the description, I thought it would play a more major role in the story, and also what happened with his dream? (I guess he chooses the law way)

I can't remember what else I want to say. It's just a very, very lovely read, every emotion and moment is written perfectly, beautifully, I love it, thank you so much for writing and for sharing
KayJayxoxox
#9
I took a long break from AFF as I had read pretty much everything that seemed interesting to me (well written stories with good plots).
This was a fantastic story to come back to AFF.
This story has literally been a constant thought in my head for weeks.
Well done and thank you.
softserverp #10
this is honestly one of the best stories I ever read, this made me feel a lot of things. this is like a movie almost, every paragraph is so good