Chapter 1: OMG!!!!!!... i had just found out that writting is a lot of fun, now you guys made it zillions times much better by giving sweet and thoughtful comments... i'm sooooooo happy!! I simply lost words! Honestly part of me got excited but also a bit worried, since now i realized that you DO pay serious attention to my writting kekeke... i will surely take into mind of your pointers... hopefully i can always keep writting, and just maybe (wish me luck!) gets a little bit better with your kind supports, but still enjoyable for myself kekeke... and you sweet guys reading. Again : Thankyouuuuu!!

Soo since you politely asked for a review I took my time to read it again and give you a proper one, we don't want halfhearted things right?^^ Let's start off with some constructive criticism-
I would advise you to change the format a little, to make the paragraphs shorter, it would be more pleasant to read.
And there are some situations where it isn't clear who does or says what (no easy thing to write when there is a bunch of six dorks together^^), making that a bit clearer would be a hint of mine. And so you don't always have to use their names only (in that case it can get exhausting rather fast and it's very hard to find the balance there, I myself struggle soo much with it ugh-xD) you can use descriptions of them too.

And I guess english isn't your mothertongue? Mine neither. So I, as a fellow writer, can advise you to read over a chapter before uploading it (after some time again helps too) to eliminate 'slips of the pen' and find a prettier phrasing for some sentences (or parts of them). That makes it nicer for the readers and you yourself can be more satisfied. Letting someone beta it - simply read through it and point some things out (or change them immediately) that could be done better or should be corrected - helps. I'd love to help in that case if you want - you can dm me if you'd like.:3

A scene I particularly liked was the end in chapter one when syung reenters the room and so on; As well as the one after the mv filming were the members sit together, very nice! And I have to say that I feel like Ricsyung are very natural around each other in the scene before the 'coaching' (hehe) and in the office scene, a thing I really adore when it comes to Ricsyung fics. Also during the last chapter it seemed like they've got closer on a physical level before, as it's already been said before I'd be nice to read some more about that~ ^^

And now to my personal conclusion: I think the story was very fluffy and hilarious, nice to read, I'm interested in more! Your idea was amazing, very lovely. And I love how you weaved together the storyline of each chapter and overall with the titel. :33
Keep writing!! <3

Chapter 4: So cute and fluffy... Love how you manage to write the storyline and ending with the title of the song.ʕ•ٹ•ʔ

story w/ a pre quel? Kekeke... sounds exciting! Noted! I will sure think of it. Glad you enjoyed the story, thankyouuuuuu!!

Chapter 4: I think i want pre quel with story.. maybe?? I really enjoy flluff or romcom story of you..just keep it up!!

Chapter 4: Hahahaaha another ricsyung writer XD thank you so much for writing this fic. It was fun and hilarious i enjoy reading. Hope to read more from you XD new follower here