In This World

Description

“I came here to die,” the stranger says after 10 minutes of staring into the horizon. Minseok looks at him shocked before he realizes that’s why he’s here as well. To die.

 

“Me too,” Minseok answers in a whisper but the wind carries the sound to the stranger anyway. When the two young men look at each other it strikes Minseok just how beautiful the other man is.

 

His cheeks are slightly hollow, cheekbones prominent. His jaw line is incredible, one Minseok feels slightly jealous of. His eyes, although dark in the night, show the galaxy and his dark hair, now wet, clings to his forehead. There is nothing about this stranger that Minseok doesn’t find beautiful.

 

“Why?” the stranger asks. 

Foreword

  

 

Hello. 

I wanted to write a story in relation to Suicide Prevention Week because I'd seen BlackRosesTears post a blogpost about it and it is a wonderful cause. 

This story started out as frustration and venting. The original title was Tidalwave and the ocean plays a part in mimicking emotions. Out of all this ocean-talk In This World rose and even with the character death, it became a story of emotions that became very dear to me. 

If I have the chance to rewrite In This World, I might do so. Especially the ending might seem a little rushed and I understand that. I don't know what to say to that. 

Despite all that, I hope you enjoy if you decide to read. Do note that this story isn't without character death and it will be sad at some points but hopefully you'll always be able to feel new and happy by the end of it. 

This story may contain typos and grammar errors. I apologize. 

// Kim Minji


 

 

 


 

In this world
 

written by kim minji
 

characters

           * Kim minseok
           * kim jongdae
 

pairings

           * xiuchen
 

genre

           * angst
           * friendshp
 

contains

           * terminal illness
           * character death
 

copyright belongs to missminew and this story must not be redistributed  or translated without my permission.
 

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FlowerBaozi
#1
Chapter 1: wow!!! this brought some big lumps in my throat since I cannot spill those tears right now. but woah!! this is really amazing!! heartwarming and just, amazing!!! I love it. i just simply love how a stranger can sometime be the reason why we tend to hang on to our lived despite wanting to be gone forever. I realize reading this how much battle each and everyone of us fights to survive or continue living. Love it. Kudos
snowflake16
#2
Chapter 1: Poignant and heartwarming! The imagery of the thunderstorm and ocean is really well done. I loved that you didn't overdo it but gave just the right amount of detail. The story is bittersweet but that's what I like most. It's realistic too since there's no exaggerated happy ending. I honestly believe both Jongdae and Minseok got their happy endings.
lil_chicken
#3
Chapter 1: Wow, this was a ride now I'm in tears. What a lovely story!
LinaSophia #4
Chapter 1: He hasn't read the letter?! WAE?!!? Okay Im CRYING over here and that's not fair! T.T
moonflakes
#5
Chapter 1: Well okay then that's fine I'll just go sob indefinitely and forever and just cry and never stop crying TT oh my god minji how can you ever say this is bad?! It's so emotional and moving. The ending doesn't seem rushed either, it's just brilliantly poignant >.< The entire thing is brilliantly poignant, and I was enraptured. Your writing is full of emotion and that's something so many writers struggle with, but you exude it naturally and it's incredible.reading this almost felt like a reflection on how minseok feels - it's bleak, distressing, but there's that "ember of hope" as you put it and it's truly touching. I think this will speak to a lot of people as well given what the characters struggle with, parental expectations or illness or simply not knowing what they want in life, and it's beautiful tbh~ I told you I would be praising this, I knew I would be. Never talk down your writing again! Seriously I will fly across and beat you with a broomstick xD

This was incredible <3