It's you or me

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As i watch her walking away from me.My heart start to race and it aches at the same time.Why am i so happy yet unhappy. Why do i have so many emotion when it comes to you,Song ji hyo.

 
 
As i look at his strong back looking away why do i feel so sad and why does he always treat me this way? Why do i have such complicated feelings when it come to you,KIm jong Kook.

Foreword

"I am sorry Ji hyo ya"

 
 
"Tsk,oppa,i didn't think you where like this.It seems like i didn't know you at all."She said, not accepting the situation,Kim jong kook have a regretful expression on his face instead.
 
 
"I am sorry...i really am.I will make it up to you,belive me"He affirmed showing his sincerity as he walked close and closer to her.But Ji hyo didn't buy it.
 
 
"Do you think i belive you?There will never be a day like that,you will betray me again"She step back never leaving his glance,she tried to keep a distance as much as she could but then she was trapped to a wall.
 
 
"I won't belive me"
 
 
"Damn it"She swear.While Kim jong kook hug her.entrapping Song ji hyo with his muscular arms.She struggled.
 
 
"Let go!,i said to let me go!"
 
 
"Bian,Ji hyo ya!"
 
 
STRAP!
 
 
"SONG JI HYO OUT" Kim jong kook quickly let her go with her name tag in his hands,smiling for his victory while she point her finger towards him.
 
 
"YA! OPPA!YOU CHEATER!"She start to run to grab him but the man of the stuff block her since she is out.
 
 
"Nol!Wait until later!I will teach you a lesson"
 
 
"AHAHAH,sorry Ji hyo ya"Then he leave her behind.
 
 
Nest time i will be the one to betray you oppa! she smirked.
 
 

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spadenoace #1
Chapter 3: Oh noo they fight wth
The first part felt like a dream sequence that kiss scene was so sad and dramatic and I laughed at when theyre all bickering even tho it turned p serious after ahh hopefully they will be able to make up.

What is biccinum? Was wondering. I honestly dont think its super great to put these korean words here that have a direct translation or one that the audience might not be familiatlr with? Maybe for rarer words either write them in English or give a translation at the authors note or something
Anyways keep writing Im sure youd only get better haha
spadenoace #2
Chapter 2: Aw JH saying she was dying and wanting to retreat trying not to come into contact with him was really cute probs my fav bit.
Again please do keep an eye on your spelling and capitalize and standalone 'I' and whatnot and put a space after punctuation like . , or ? ....
spadenoace #3
Chapter 1: Wow just started reading this, its a good length and I like how you captured the craziness and energy of the set of Running Man ahaha
One thing I want to suggest is better spelling. You spelled Haha as ahah multiple times, and at least keep spelling of names consistent ex. Yu Jae Suk or Yoo Jae Suk or Kim Jong Kook or Kim Jong kook. As long as its consistent you should be okay.
And spelling for "hyung" is usually off. Last thing would be to put a space after each punctuation. Its got the makings of a good story so Im sure itd only grt better from here if you fixed your spelling errors.
Honestly theres a lot of free text editors that would do spellcheck for you def recommend
Mithani
#4
Chapter 4: Update soon , they are so cute
Dear try to check your spellings , your amazing so it will be perfect
Bluefeather_88 #5
Chapter 3: Thank you for the update :-) I like the flashback... their interactions were funny and sweet at the same time.
Mithani
#6
Chapter 3: Thanks for the update I like itttttt
Update soon
Mithani
#7
Chapter 1: Woooow thanks for the update I appreciate it
Can’t wait for next chapter
where1 #8
here you go dear Bluefeather_88,and thank you a lot for reading this chapter
Bluefeather_88 #9
Chapter 1: Dear author, if it’s alright, kindly use the”spartace” tag as well. Thank you :D