Chapter 1: Aaaargh, I hope Jungkook went in! :o A really nice and emotional One Shot! I liked the way you wrote and Taehyung's monologue in general. I liked the way you portrayed his thoughts. So that part was really well done, but Taehuyng kept repeating what he did do Kookie but they way his thoughts are I kinda feel left out, because it is kinda written like I know the background story (which I don't know). SoI think you should have hinted that "bad thing" Taehyung did a little more, make a flashback or don't emphazise it as much. But still well done! Hope to read something more from you ! :)
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