Shot through the heart

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Description

Seulgi and Joohyun are childhood friends and they like each other but too coward to admit their feelings. And a transfer student from Canada, Wendy, who's vocal about her feelings for Joohyun. Will she manage to gain Joohyun's love?

Foreword

Hello, everyone this is my first fic. I hope you'll like this random story on my mind. I only own this fic. Please look forward. Feel free to comment your thoughts about this story. :)

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juunji #1
Chapter 2: I high key really want seulrene angst tbh

Just from reading the foreword the story eludes to the fic of Seulgi letting go so the Wenrene ship can sail, and I really hope it goes that way but with even more angst.

(OPINION) From reading these chapters, I feel like your use of words make the story seem stiff and unnatural. In my opinion, I believe people who are in school and especially for people the same age and are friends, they would talk more casually and probably have some banter also. From the words you used, it seemed like they are more distant like they just met and are trying to be polite.

I’m not trying to bash you or anything author i just wanted to type down my thoughts of your story. I really hope you can update soon and add more angst gradually when the story goes on!
twentyforty3 #2
SEEEUUUUULREEEEEENEEEEE
ALEEKIM #3
Chapter 2: SEULRENE FIGHTING!!!!!!!!
kaiyennirene #4
seulrene ftw
rosiesolo #5
Chapter 2: Rooting for Seurrene
nrmrh3112 #6
Chapter 2: wenrene please, wendy so cute :*
BeansProutMitzu #7
Chapter 2: Seulgi yah pls step up your game... or else wannie the cutie will snatch ur joohyun unnie hahah
Sosh_022 #8
Chapter 1: oh no I hope seulrene realize their feelings for each other soon
joohyun-ah please don't fall for Seungwan
BeansProutMitzu #9
Chapter 1: Cant wait to ur update..
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