Chapter 27: What happened to the other characters? It ended just like that? I really felt like I wasted my time by reading this.
Honestly, it took me 3 weeks to finish this. Why? Because I can't help but cringe each time. The grammar and plot is a mess. It's boring as . I just NEEDED to finish this, so I can make a comment.
Chapter 10: Chapter 9:
Seriously, what's the deal? On the top, "It's been almost TWO WEEKS since the kiss" BUT on the middle "It's been almost A WEEK since the kiss"
Chapter 27: This story is just so cute, I love how the two got married in the end. My favorite part is the Behind Story where Yoongi wants to know if Yeoju will continue calling him "Ahjussi", it's so cute.
I didn't expect Chanyeol to have more scenes in the story because I thought he was just a minor character and didn't expect for him to be related to Taehyung.
Chapter 21: I really did think he got her a bouquet of flowers, turns out it's a bouquet of chicken wings.
The part where Yoongi mention ramyun and cup ramyun being the same thing reminded me of a conversation I had with my sister earlier. She was telling me how turmeric and ginger are the same kinds of spice but I pointed out to her that they may be the same, the only difference is turmeric is more orange while ginger is kind of light yellow.
Chapter 19: Yeoju's mother sounds awesome, I like the part where Yeoju remembers how her mother nearly killed Jimin for kissing a 9-year-old Yeoju. I also love how her grandmother asks for money after giving her a talisman. I hope Yeoju having the charm won't cause some problems with the relationship she has with Taehyung and Seokjin.
Chapter 18: I find it adorable for some reason whenever a guy asks a girl to call them "Oppa".
It's cute how Yoongi got jealous of hearing Yeoju call Namjoon "Oppa" while he gets stuck with "Ahjussi".
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