Chapter 6: One of the things that I love about this story is the way you write. What i actually don't like is the storyline is toooo fast. I like the idea of fan meeting and all. But the fact that mingyu kiss her on the rooftop kind make me taken back. Because it is too sudden. And then another meeting, another phase of their 'relationship'. I meant i get it that mingyu is minju's ub but i doesn't make sense how fadt they both progress from fan and idol to lovers. I think maybe tone down a bit about their interactions. Make it more idk realistic(?) not according to the timeline but do itaccording to what actually would happen if it is in reality. The first few chapters iss good. But the storyline momentum dropped throughout the chapters. Nevertheless, good job on your writing. I like your style of writing.
Btw i hope i don't come across as a hateful person. My comment is meant to be constructive. No hate intended <3