I Want You Back

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It's loosely based on Jackson 5's "I Want You Back" lyrics, that Twice covered a week ago.

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roseinyourarea
#1
Chapter 1: I love how you wrote this, Tzuyu's feelings regarding the breakup seem very realistic, and so does the ending. And I like both Satzu and Saida, so this story was very enjoyable for me :)
satzuminatozaki
#2
Chapter 1: Whyyyyy.. I want part two and it should turn the tables, or I'll die huhuhuhu its okay tho I love this hihe
yodtzu
#3
Chapter 1: that “the suite life on deck of zack and cody” reference thoooooooooooooo
Samkam
#4
Chapter 1: Feel bad for tzuyu but she'll learn to move on eventually.
Kk16ir #5
Chapter 1: I think thats a good ending, one that is close to reality
ahnhaeju
#6
Chapter 1: I love the story, you nailed it! I can relate tho T-T
Sana is so disloyal :( ButTzuyu herself is sooo empty, gosh, I understand how tiring she would be. I think, although it's already 2 years, their relationship is still immature. They haven't learned each other well.
I don't think the Chaeyu moment is necessary. It doesn't give much impact to me. At the end of the story, I was still sad along with Tzuyu that I didn't care about anyone else. Hmm, maybe it's also because Chaeyoung only appears once in this story. Maybe if it was Jihyo, it would be more meaningful, since I know Jihyo cared a lot about Tzuyu.
I like it when Sana met Dahyun who was "better" than Tzuyu. It's my favorite part, I love what you do there. Although this would be weird, it would be a twist if it was Sana who wanted Tzuyu back in the end, not otherwise lol... But, Nah, it would be weird~
In the end, Tzuyu learned something about the relationship. That you have to put some efforts to make it work. Even though she didn't get Sana, she got a life-lesson. I think that what makes me less sad about the break-up. It's still sad anyway and I still want them back X'D
Overall, I love it, author-nim. Sorry for this random comment. I hope you will make another good story like this in the future <3
GayTrain
#7
Chapter 1: im actually crying hhhh but the chaeyu at the end makes me feel a little better
Kenmanami
#8
Chapter 1: No sequel nyeheheh that's fine in intself. Good read author nim