swimming into your heart

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Description

Two strangers meet for a swimming class, to another swimming class, another and another. Well, now they aren't strangers anymore.

They are the Baek and the Taeng. 

Foreword

before that, i at description, excuse me for the cringey title and hi guys. it's me. the unknown lmao. i love baekyeon to the moon and back and this story is basically just a fiction i came out after having shower thoughts lol.

i just love them :) 

feel free to leave comments, maybe we can have a chat.

you guys can give me prompts too, i might as well do some more. im on holidays yippeh \(^0^)/

Author's Thoughts
taengstars
swimming into your heart; so i merged the chapter and i edited a little bit. thanks for the love, i really appreciate it :)
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Happylalalaa #1
Chapter 4: What a good story. Glad I found this
Baekyeon49 #2
love your way of writing
Baekyeon49 #3
I love the story
baekyeonfam #4
Chapter 4: please do make for of this :) it's so beautiful
TaeJi101 #5
Chapter 4: I love this ^^ Baekyeon is my fav XD can't wait for more:)
sowonxss #6
hi!

the first thing i noticed was the humour between taeyeon and the people she interacted with, especially with baekhyun. i loved the snarky comments made to each other when they became casual HAHA. the simplicity of the chapter organisation was really nice: you could clearly see their progression from strangers to friends to lovers.

on the other hand though, i kind of wanted a bit more detail development, especially taeyeon's fear of water. it confused me a little throughout the story because i thought taeyeon's fear of water was also supposed to be a crucial part of her character, and it ended up kind of...fading out as the story went on? the implication is that it is solved by the end of the story, but i feel like there could have been a bit more of that mixed into baekhyun and taeyeon's interactions.

overall, it's a short and sweet fic! thank you very much for posting it-- it was lovely to read.
taetaemeow #7
Chapter 3: i love ur story??..update pless
rainbowpanda1804 #8
loved this fic so much. absolutely love your style of writing too. please keep writing baekyeon fanfics:))
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