Reminiscing

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Description

One night while talking on the phone with Wheein, Hyejin abruptly ends the call on a bad note and goes unreachable for around two hours. Wheein worries about her love and looks for her everywhere. She seeks the help of Moonbyul and Yongsun who help look for her and the night ends with reminiscing old memories and many more. 

Foreword

Got some inspiration from here and there and finally came up with this story. What's funny is that I don't remember writing the end and I thought I was stuck somewhere but when I planned to look at how much I had written I was already pretty much done. That only means I was THAT sleepy while typing it xD. And this is by far the longest one shot I've written and I don't even know how I managed to do so. I hope you enjoy it! 

The one shot stories I post after this one will go into the collection book (unless I find them better off alone).

TODAY IS THEIR 4TH ANNIVERSARY OMG I CAN'T!! I HOPE WE CAN HAVE MANY MORE YEARS WITH THE FOUR OF THEM.

also, totally not necessary but while reading you can listen to Words Don't Come Easy, In My Room, Be Calm and A little bit/Sting in this order.  

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Fengxian
#1
Chapter 1: I liked how all of them let out all their feelings about the stress and hardships of their career. It was a really great moment.

As for the ending, I feel Wheesa could have been more touched up on especially since Wheein spent half the story looking for Hyejin and they shared a kiss that wasn’t really talked about later.

I guess the ambiguity of what their relationship is works as well. Clearly they love each other but is there more.
cjmoo_ #2
Chapter 1: Hello there! I followed your advice and listened to the four songs you recommended readers to listen to while reading. I feel that the songs are very apt in conveying the message that you're trying to bring across in this story. Initially I read the story too quickly so the song didn't really match the scene, but then I slowed down and it was all good. At the point where Hwasa starting singing Be Calm in this story, I started listening to it at the right time!

I read this story with the Description in mind, and I really like how this story went. All four of them were so supportive of each other and loving towards one another. I love the scene where Byul assured Yongsun that no matter what happened to her, Yongsun's still Yongsun. It's quite cute to see the way Yongsun and Byul comforted Wheein in different ways. Yongsun really gave off the motherly aura here. I like how through Hyejin's disappearance, the members looked back at the memorable places where they spent time together with Hyejin. It's something like only when it's gone then you treasure it. The part where they took the stairs instead of the elevator really showed how anxious they were. Through the way you write, Wheein's frustrations could clearly be felt, be it through her actions or her words. It's meaningful how Wheein and Hyejin could recognise each other's voices.

I enjoyed reading the scene at the end where the four of them were reminiscing about the past. They've definitely gone through so many changes, be it individually or as a group, over the course of 4 years (and even more), and their career had taken a toll on them in different ways, as seen by the various concerns each member had. Despite all that, you've beautifully shown how they're better and stronger as four due to having support and encouragement from each other, and this is really touching. They couldn't function if they don't know where one member is. I think Yongsun's very mature in her thinking though the words she said. She knew exactly what her members needed to hear in order to become stronger in this harsh field of work. Group hug! :') And yay you ended this with Wheesa! They deserve this ending.

Thank you very much for this story! Much appreciated. :))