The whisper of a witch

Description

Witches are undying creatures and human-beings wither as time passes.

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"You told me not to fall in love with a witch. How could I not?"

Foreword

A witch and a human familiar hnng get ready for fluff and angst.

Kinda sad hmm wants to cry hmmm

Their appearances are all taken from decalcomanie era (hair colour and styling).

Enjoy!

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Dorkible #1
Chapter 1: I love this so much </3
cjmoo_ #2
Chapter 1: This is such a beautifully written story. It was painful seeing the whole process of Byul's house getting engulfed by flames through Byul's eyes, especially in the paragraph which starts with 'She could do nothing to help them.' I like the careful details you've included, such as Byul's appearance in the fire and then the stark contrast between flames and the ocean and sun. Actually while reading this story, from the start to the end, I felt like I was surrounded by some magical vibes because of the way you wrote it. I feel like the way you wrote each and every paragraph is so meticulous. The way Yongsun is written as a caring mother figure is beautiful and can be seen through her tiniest actions, such as this line: 'The lady smiled and the cold hand on her chin moved to the back of her head.' I like how you show progression of time through the comparison of Byul and Yongsun's heights and their physical appearance such as the change in outfits and the size of Byul's tattoo. Initially I found the parts where you wrote about how Yongsun continues to regard Byul as her little girl a little repetitive, but at the end, the repetition falls into place, firstly at the part where Byul confessed to Yongsun and secondly at the end where there is a shift of feelings on Yongsun's part towards Byul. I liked how smooth the transition of POVs from Byul's to Yongsun's is from the paragraph which starts with '"Stop!"' to the next paragraph which starts with 'She had lived a long life and had plenty of familiars before.' The A/N or summary at the end is much appreciated! Thank you for the elaboration. Maybe it's just me, but at the end, I feel like Yongsun's actions was quite selfish? It's selfish if we look at the situation from Byul's POV, but I guess it could also be liberating when we look at it from Yongsun's POV. Maybe I'm just biased towards Byul's POV ^^; Thank you very much for this story!! :)