Witness

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Moon Byul Yi is a good cop, competent, resourceful, tenacious, and smart to boot, she has everything going for her to go all the way to the top, if only she was not so open about her uality.

Nothing ever make sense about murder, but this case left her with a young witness that she promised to protect, even if it cost her everything. 

 

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Setfiretoawolf #1
Chapter 1: Continue pls
AgentKuga
#2
Chapter 1: oh this is great!! I like it~
elasan #3
Chapter 1: this is so good, your writing is amazing ^^
vebyana #4
Next chapter please TT
xxwydxx #5
This is so good ><
Honestly hope this could be continued on TxT

Love all ur storiesss
Sumo_dog
#6
I really like all your stories, and this one is no exception. I hope you do continue this one day because it's pretty interesting and I like detective cases too. Also, toddler Wheein is just too adorable haha :)
cjmoo_ #7
Chapter 1: I really really like the flow of this chapter. I like how we got to see Byul in action first before you started to introduce Byul as a character and what her background is. Byul doesn't deserve this treatment just because of her uality! I enjoyed reading the details of the police work, especially the part where Byul was coaxing Wheein to come out of the doll house. Shows that being a police officer is more than just solving cases, but also about human interaction. Poor Wheein. I'm also liking Hwasa's character. Soft Hwasa is unexpected but very much welcomed! For some reason I really like this sentence: 'Carrying the girl carefully in her arms, Wheeinie only stirred slightly, the toll of the today taking control of her tiny body and blessed her with a deep slumber.' - I think the choice of words you use in this sentence ('blessed' says a lot about the weight of the situation for Wheein who witnessed what happened to her mother) as well as generally in your stories makes your stories a pleasant read. Looking forward to the next update! Quite curious to know more about Yunho being Byul's ex-partner. Oh, and I appreciate you writing a case fic for this fandom!
passerbyz #8
Chapter 1: Wow. I got the notification that you posted a new story but only found time to read it now....at...230am.....
Damn :( baby Wheein. It’s really good! Looking forward to more.
fairooz #9
Chapter 1: aaah this chapter tugs my heartstrings :'(
The details though, you must be doing some quite research eh? It's really nice
Eagerly looking forward for future chapters :D