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To all my readers, I really can't thank you enough for keeping on reading this fic so far even though it's far from perfect, really, thank you :(

I've been thinking about this a lot... and there are parts of this story that I'm not satisfied this- there are parts that I've written during my writer's block simply for the sake of 'updating and keep on writing' but they've become parts I'm not satisfied with and honestly it's been bugging me and I've tried to ignore it because, well, this is just a fic and maybe I could fix it in the coming chapters... but turns out I can't ignore them laodaosdna

And there are jumbled up facts in this story and they really bother me everytime I re-read this story from chapter 1. I'm still a beginner in writing and I have tons of mistakes. 

But this story means a lot to me, like when I came up with this story this isn't just about kaiseul but there's something quite personal in here so if I couldn't aim for perfection or good quality, I want this to at least be decent or 'okay'.

So yeah, I'm still lacking, but I've learned my mistakes so what I'm gonna do now is I'm going to do a massive edit or rewrite of this story from chapter one until 12. I'm going to repair messed up facts and some characters and some plots. I'm so sorry for doing this but I hope you guys understand :" hopefully once I'm done rewriting it we have less chapters and more developments (ya I own up to that mistake sobs).

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smartpanda1010101 #1
Chapter 26: this is one of the best stories i have ever read. i hope you think of continuing at some point!
Dedehb #2
Chapter 13: Still waiting for an update :)
hunrenebam #3
Chapter 26: god I wish Jongin's father took a step back for once and let Jongin show his capabilities too ughhh but please update when you get a chance, i love your writing so much :)
candypark #4
Chapter 26: still waiting for your comeback :( I really like this story...
Mandaaa #5
Chapter 26: I finished 13 chapters in one sitting!!! Very exciting fanfic! I’m actually excited to see how Jongin would let go of Krystal and finally love Seulgi wholeheartedly.
parboni #6
Chapter 26: I actually forgot when I was the last time I read fanfictions. But this piece is really close to my heart and forced me back in. The delay in the update was really worth it. The way you're smoothly combing up the relationship between the two is really commendable. Hope you're doing well in this pandemic and keep up the good work.
Adrimore #7
Chapter 26: Yeeeeeey your back!!!!!
And FINALLY they talked about the big elephant in the room after who knows how long, I'm not surprised at how Seulgi took it cause after all she's very duty bound as Jongin and they are very similar in so many aspects but that one specially.
I did liked this little developments they had towards the other like we can see that when Jongin went to clear his head a little he still thought about Soojung but it seemed a little less than previous times, I don't think he will ever forget her and neither will she after all they were their first loves and that will always remain but now he is starting to see Seulgi in a different light not romantically yet but it's a start, I feel that for them to start loving each other both need to love themselves first, they can't escape their reality and they don't want to but despite their position they have to think they deserve to be happy for themselves and then think about also deserving to be happy with the person next to them.
And with this little rebellion they are thinking about " the crown" in rushing an heir is really a perfect start.
I want to see more bold actions of Seulgi like how she took some initiatives here with Jongin.
Yes she's nice kind patient and all the nice adjectives you can think of but she still needs to be more assertive with him and maybe snap at him from time to time with how harsh he is with himself and other matters, otherwise he will still be thinking of her like a glass doll.

Maybe this will also help the King see more of them growing and eventually making him trust in his son to leave some matters to him, other than that I do agree with the King on the importance of his role in that particular negotiation, politically speaking but his health situation is no joke.
nadwifeygd #8
Chapter 26: how i wish jongin's father will fully trust him to lead the nation. they need to talk and discuss more instead of the father lashing out on him in front of the others :(
dyahkst #9
Chapter 26: Omg you update it! ??
I love i love it so much, the way both of them are not ready with the whole things but they're trying to make it work and don't forget that they also considerate to each other.
This is not a typical romantic story where the main lead meet then they fall in love but i just love this kind of story because you know everything need time. All the best for jongin and seulgi, i hope jongin can open his heart for seulgi.
Jungkookabs #10
Chapter 26: yay! you updated! I really enjoy reading this fic. I can’t wait for the next update!
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