Cut The Cord

Description

All his life he wanted her, only to lose her to someone else.

 

Now it's time to cut the cord.

Foreword

A quick little something. Anyone who knows me knows I am all about a happy ending. I firmly believe that stories should take us away and give us that unrealistic ending we want because reality is too harsh. That said, I do have my rare moments and I'm feeling some kinda way (ie. meloncholy, upset, depressed, angry) right now and this came out. This is not the piece I intended to write, what I wanted to write I couldn't figure out who to use for the male lead so I decided on another plot I'd been thinking about and Leo seemed perfect because it's so angsty.

I am not satisfied.

I wrote in first person which is also extremely rare as I'm not a fan of writing in first person at all, but here it is lol! It's choppy, I'm sorry, again the first person pov is not my style generally and I hardcore at it. Much respect to those who write in this perspective constantly.  

I hope you like it, constructive critism and feedback always welcome!

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shuzyah
#1
Chapter 1: love is selfish - that's why it is as beautiful as it is cruel. if it can be shared or mellow down, it will not be that beautiful or passionate. harsh but true.