Breakeven

Description

Twenty-five year old nurse Sokyung never knew that she could cherish life more than she already did until she meets the Oh Sehun that screams of nothing but danger. Turns out, she never did learn to cherish life more--because she ended up cherishing Sehun's life more than her own.

Foreword

Hello everyone!

 

This fic is a request fic made by EBSGSF from my fic request story (which you can request fics too by clicking here)!

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Title: Breakeven

Pairing: Sehun x OC

Genre: angst, and very little fluff if you squint i guess

Wordcount: -

Plot: Sokyung learns that throwing away everything to be with Sehun, a loyal member of the mobster, might be one of the stupidest stunt she pulls in her life.

 

If you guys want to see the actual request page for this story click here, but beware of spoilers.

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Moonlight_23 #1
Chapter 1: I am really not sure about their relationship.Like i know that she really likes /loves sehun but does Sehun feels the same way too? With the way Sehun treats her sometimes it feel that he does not like her at least maybe not as much as she does.But then seeing how Sehun react when he knew that he broke his promise to her make it seems that Sehun love her as much as she did too (?) But he just bad at expressing his feelings.Maybe because he used to not exposing his feelings in front of his enemies.I really wanted to know what his reaction to her letter?? And what she going to do after leaving (?) him? Would she return to her old job?? Hmm i am really curious
ichigojamu
#2
Chapter 1: I knew their relationship was going downhill from the start but I wasn't prepared for the ending at all. I feel so uneasy. Sehun seemed like such a jerk when he got annoyed by her nagging.. I mean I can try to understand that it'd be annoying if you didn't want all that attention over you and have to answer to all those questions but cant he just see how worried she was? She just wanted to know that he was fine and not hurt but instead he had to hurt her too. She knew what she was getting into from the beginning but its not like you can stay still and just accept it when you're lover is bleeding right in front of you. I felt like it was hard to see whether Sehun really did love her too, he seemed irritated with her for the most part so I can understand why she felt like a hindrance in his life. He didn't express his feelings well and when he did, it was a rare occurrence. I can totally empathise with Sokyung in her letter; she felt like his life would have been better off without her and so she chose to leave. I wonder what Sehun's reaction would have been and whether he would have finally realised her worth.
july-pupetta #3
Hiii i just found your story, i actually already read one of yours and since i really like your writing i got very curious of your other works :D. I like this story it was so interesting and gosh it's so heartbreaking what happened. I can see they love each other, but maybe they really needed some space, so i think she made the right decision. Sad and heartbroken... poor Sokyung, that letter she left for him was sooo sad :(:(.
CSanWS
#4
Chapter 1: Every author will hate it when their readers comment this.. but... im gonna say it...
Please update! This story is really beautiful n i have read it the sec time already? I love it
onlyixing
#5
Chapter 1: i love it
AliceHagiwara
#6
Chapter 1: This makes me tear up :'(
chonanay
#7
Chapter 1: Your stories are like addictions..
Love it!

It's not completed yet.. Right..? There'll be a closure and (proper)ending..right?
KarraAriana
#8
Chapter 1: Goshhh my heart hurts...
AcidPop
#9
Chapter 1: Aww man ur stories always make me cry like a stupid baby!!
But I can’t help it I’m in love with your stories ❤️

How many chapters will this have? Seems like a short fic but I don’t mind a long fic too ;)
mr_galaxy #10
Chapter 1: It's so sad. *Cries*