Chapter 3: hey, i know you haven’t updated this in a while, but i’m kinda missing this story, and i think it’s beautiful :’(( i hope you come back soon, id love to see more of it!! thank you :))

Chapter 3: Nice catch there. xD

Chapter 3: Update plssss :((((((

Chapter 3: This story looks really interesting, and I love Hogwarts AUs so I'm already into it. The relationships between the characters seem fun, especially that big twist with Krystal! Looking forward to seeing how this develops

Chapter 3: fuufshdkasjb you got me

my heart did 12 flips when i have my eyes on that last line

Chapter 3: That last line got me saying 'What the hell.' out loud. That was totally unexpected :O But anyways, putting that aside for now, Hyejin and pizza is the shippiest ship to be shipped in this story, facts only!!! I'm liking it that you didn't jump in straight to the tournament in this story. It's very fun and interesting to see the everyday school lives of the characters. Byul's so kind ;-; She apologised for her schoolmates to Yongsun when she did nothing wrong ;-; It's nice to see Byul and Yongsun being very comfortable with each other even though it's only been a while. Damn, the prejudice people still have towards non-pure blood wizards truly . I can't believe the Durmstrang school system perpetuates this. I really like it that Byul and Yongsun shared with each other about their schools. Having the backgrounds of students and their schools makes this story fuller and more complete. This part though: 'Can Yongsun marry the handsome girl whose nose wrinkled up cutely while she smiling even if they just met yesterday?' - whipped Yongsun is confirmed. But then again, Byul's so charming, who wouldn't fall for her~ Byul blushing is so cute! Their banter made it seem like they've known each other since forever! At the part where Seulgi's character comes in the story and Yongsun was guessing what's her relationship with Byul, I didn't think we would be presented with that bomb of a last line in this chapter T-T Seulgi's so nice and cute. 'You thirsty hoe.' got me chuckling. Of course, it's Hyejin~ And this line made me chuckle too: 'Seulgi continues her interrupted meal, seriously, Hogwarts food is definitely delicious!' Gosh, the unknown status of relationship between Hyejin and Wheein is killing me! Don't worry about building up the friendship first. I'm enjoying it very much! And the pixel art is adorable!! Thank you very much for this update. :) (Oh, and I would just like to point out that there are quite a few times where you used 'i' instead of 'I'.)

Chapter 2: I really like how easy it is to read this chapter. Good flow of words here. I also like how you explain things step-by-step, like the part about Yongsun's name and the uniform of students from Beauxbatons and Drumstrang. Yongsun handled that Krueger guy like a pro! Just imagine if she weren't the Head Prefect ahaha. It's cute how much Byul mattered to Yongsun at this point of time. Hyejin is just being very Hyejin here xD Wow Yongsun, observing Byul's features to this extent! She's whipped xD I like how Byul's personality is different from her appearance. I think you ended this chapter abruptly quite well, as in at least it's a proper closure to this chapter. :)

Chapter 3: YESSSSSS OH MY GOD
you beautiful person you, i absolutely love all of this
the ships = YES
the writing = YES
the characters = YES
the concept = YES
the history = Y E S
you don’t know how much i’m in love with this, it is beautiful in every single way
to answer your question from earlier, maybe you should stick with a wide variety of names, and then for specifically korean names, you can use idols and stuff.
but seriously, good job! can’t wait for the next update ;)

I love Krystal and seeing that this is a moonsun story makes me want to bawl already T.T don't break her heart please :(((

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