Chapter 2: It's a really good story I love it ! So much happened in only the two first chapters and I am excited to read more <3

Chapter 2: Oh boy, I feel like I can't express my emotions well because words aren't enough to describe how I feel right now. Everything about this story makes me want to find a rich producer and get him to shoot a movie based on it because it's too cool to be known by only a few people. But of course it wouldn't be the same without the squad aka Johnny, Ten, Mark (*-*), Honey, Ariadne and Yukhei and probably they wouldn't be the members of cast (but who knows since Yukhei is now ready to take over Korean variety shows :D) and it would be a pity because in my imagination all of them are there and they are fine af. Anyway, I absolutely enjoyed this part because it was action-packed but the usual humour wasn't absent either. Yukhei with his Avengers enthusiasm was so cute but Johnny was also hilarious with his teasing. My favourite was when he blurted out smitten and Ten hit his shoulder in response. (I feel like you had to incorporate smitten somehow after you had told me about its meaning :D) I was happy to see a newbie member of the group because not everyone can be confident and cool when they first get to know about their power. Plus, it was our cutest little baby lion, so kudos for you for his cameo! ;) Honey was also a refreshing character, especially because she was a girl and we need more girl characters in action stories, girls can kick asses just as well as boys. ^^I still don't like Jedikiah, I wish he was stuck on a deserted island with his super ability to kill others because maybe then he would stop playing the superior big boss and totally messed up dad whose emotional intelligence is close to a frog's. I loved the twist with the electricity and the end game, it was really cool that they thought of so many scenarios but considering that Yukhei has seen most of the stuff that happened at Ultra, it shouldn't have come as a surprise than they were prepared for a lot of outcomes.
All in all, I had a blast reading this part, it was hilarious, heart-warming and nerve-wrecking. The last scene was so cute, I can't tell you how much I loved it. I hope my comment made sense because I'm not sure I can function properly after a masterpiece like this. Thank you thank you thank you for dedicating it to me! Love you to the Moon and back!!! <3333

Chapter 1: This is so cute! Hehe future son in law ?

Why do u always write story about my bias ><
But really love it tho!!!!❤❤❤

Chapter 1: Nice story
It has flow and the character have a characteristic
This story manage to capture reader attention and it is really good^^

Chapter 1: Oh man, how much I love this story!!! ;)
First of all, thank you so so so much for dedicating this wonderful story to me! I'll definitely re-read it before my exams. Graduation seems like a milestone in everyone's life but I believe what I've learned as a person and not a student matters more than any academic achievement. Thank you for making my graduation more joyful and memorable, I'm sure it'll be the gift I would remember the most because stories that were written carefully and with love always mean so much to me. I really appreciate everything that people create from literally nothing and writing is one of them. So thank you so much again!
As for the story, Lucas WAS the perfect kind of Lucas. I mean you portrayed him so well, I laughed at so many lines, he was just hilarious and confident and smug and still lovable, just as we know him. I knew that he would fit this AU as soon as I got to know the AU because this boy is an adventure himself. :D His personality added a lot to the feeling of the whole story, not to mention Ariadne's character. Man, I loved her so much. She was the good kind of sassy, a girl who stands up for herself and even manages to escape Ultra! Mad respect for her! It was cool that they knew each other before the whole thing and went to the same school, I guess they could start trusting each other sooner because they knew each other beforehand. Also, my favourite line of hers was 'You can stick that explanation up in your pretty ' and 'No, we don't need names like that, Yukhei, we are not the Avengers'. Oh my dear, I laughed throughout the whole story. (Maybe except the time when we got to know about the background of the boy's mother.) I loved him with all his cheeky smiles and 'I don't like to look stupid' lines, he was such an iconic character. Though I also loved as his personality changed and he started to distrust Ultra and his father. Kudos for you for adding that twist with his father! He was really a heartless monster for using Lucas, lying about his mother and then treating him like a dumb kid. He really deserves best. On top of that, I got why Ariadne was so angry at Ultra and she had every reason to rebel against them, I'm glad her remarks motioned Lucas to search for answers. I also loved the twist at the end when we got to know that Ariadne stole Lucas' files as well and he was written down like a threat. Oh man, I didn't see that coming! And that bonus... OMG IT WAS SO HILARIOUS!!! Even if it was short, it was so cool! I'm glad you decided to add it because I laughed so hard and Lucas' answer was the bomb! Haha, he just couldn't let it slip! ^^
Overall, thank you so much for this wonderful story! It was even more I could ask for; funny (to the point I nearly cried sometimes and my stomach hurt by the time I finished reading the story), lovely, action-packed, twisted and really, really enjoyable. I loved the twists, the characters, the conversations, the descriptions, so everything! I can't thank you enough for dedicating it to me! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!! You never fail to amaze me with your ideas and your writing style and this story was no exception! How can anyone write so well??? ^^
A massive thank you and a giant bear hug for you!!!! <3333 LOVE YOU MAN!!! ;)