Indifferent [renmin/minren, markhyuck/markchan]

Description

Renjun, a quiet student, stays low, likes musicals and being alone at home. Undoubtedly not a lot of people know him at school.

Jaemin is popular, part of the basketball team and is basically the face of the whole school with his 4 other friends. 

Jaemin often finds himself looking Renjun during class, for a reason we do not know of.

Foreword

This is my first fic on aff, first fic I'm serious about and actually wanting to continue, so I hope it's not too shabby and everyone enjoys it! Sorry for the crap writing since I ain't experienced in this field :)

Author's Thoughts
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Im sorry chapter 3 is a little short and lacking in content, I promise I'll make up for it with what happens in ch 5! :)
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Cap_Cookie #1
Chapter 4: Please update!! ????
CARLLL #2
Chapter 4: i need an update one day
lanzkiransu #3
Chapter 4: This needs to be updated! Its amazing. Uour writing style also is quite complex in a way because you switch POVs with out labels but its okay. The reader just needs to be more attentive. Hope you finish this!
nourlanda #4
Chapter 4: Wah I love it please update ????
iKONIC_Queen #5
Chapter 3: I love it, plz update when u can
stupideas #6
Chapter 3: okay so this is a concept that i love. the further they go, the closer they get. the more jaemin says he'd stay away, the more he gets pulled back to renjun, who only wants everything to disappear.

i love how jaemin is. he's "bad" but not bad at all, just misunderstood and someone who'd like to keep everything to himself. seems blind, if you ask me. that's my observation till now, lol. he obviously wants to befriend renjun but wouldn't because he somewhere can't accept it himself. i don't know why but jaemin wanting renjun to look at him with an emotion that isn't fear was heart warming. with the flow of events renjun would become bolder, i think, but i can also see jaemin softening. the thought itself is so beautiful--- i'm so looking forward to this fic now!

they'll find the balance in each other. yixing will be proud lmao, but yes, they're at the extreme ends rn, of their um, personality?? i don't know how to describe this BUT i'm interested to see how things unfold. i have signed myself up for my upcoming misery :'D

i also wanted to comment on the markhyuck part. hyuck standing up for him and renjun- that's TOTALLY him and i love hyuck for it. also mark wondering if he went too far, and doing something to make up for it. maybe this is the start of hyuck's changing feelings -- maybe THAT would make him see that mark does that because he wants hyuck's attention. (tossing in some personal opinions: i find you amazing. i'm a er for bully x victim fics but not really? s people do to gain their love interests' attention and the other one getting annoyed af. i live for those as long as the characters know the damn limits and i'm seriously loving markhyuck. donghyuck's responses are a plus point AND mark's reactions. i think it was in the precious chap but the exchange between renjun and donghyuck where donghyuck says it'd be nice if mark was scared of him wigisosoaowowtora i LOVE HYUCK EVEN MORE NOW!!) aaaaaaaaa i'm so- idk dying to know how this unfolds. keep up the great work!!
stupideas #7
Chapter 2: holy hell i love the way you described how jaemin felt
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