Chapter 1: This angst! Actually for a moment at the start I thought Yongsun died later on the story because of the fourth paragraph, but this hurts equally bad. My gosh, seeing the scene, through Byul's eyes, the part where Yongsun and Eric play in the rain and Yongsun enjoying it when usually Byul shelters her... This contrast in actions... And then that last line... Why don't you just stab me in the heart using that umbrella ahaha. Great job here! The emotions are really brought out. Thanks for this!
Chapter 1: Haha it's a nice twist. Why don't people write stories where byul is straight but Yong isn't? So unfair to always read stories of byul's broken heart haha
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