you are a poem that breathes

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i can't see you in the moonlight.
so please turn your body to the sun.

leave the stars you are trapped in,
so we can breathe together.

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cjmoo_ #1
Chapter 1: What the... This plot twist! I really didn't see it coming! There are so many complex layers in this which makes me enjoy this piece. It took me a while ton realise the 'ink' at the start is actually referring to this whole diary-like piece. The whole 'kim yongsun doesn't come back' repetition, why didn't I see it earlier? I think it's really interesting how the beginning, while it's from Byul's POV throughout, is kind of a more far away, detached persona, and then as it gradually reaches the end the persona is just bam right smack of everything. The idea of who or what 'god' actually is... Wow. Really good read!
Sheshe2399 #2
Chapter 1: Wow. I didn't expect the massive plot twist.