Chapter 2: Wow interesting premise, makes me wonder if it's all gone to or just certain parts. Also a nice take or the situation from Yongguk's pov. As for my poor Zelo, it that they didn't want him living in the dorm with them, and yet at the same time because of their cruelty he's alive to live another day.

Chapter 2: "the dried remnants of blood" aww look gummy bear thinks he's a Big Scary Mafia Boy With Blood. aw what a darling
"his two eyes sparkling" lmao what aRe You Sure. sparklign with what? self loathign???
"the grey dust hovering in the air" yes, its called pollution. move to a place without pollution if u want to tell the time by staring at the sky instead of looking at ur watch. jeez
"he SOLD ICICLES" yes hello my name is gummy bear wouLD YOU LIKE ONE (1) ICICLE
angst angst angst wooooooo
wooooop go save help boy.
ooh i ship gummy bear and rich boy with rich pjs
gET READY FOR BANG BANGKOOK, ANALYZING THE REASONS YOU ARE SORRY!
"yongguk wonders how much filth of the worl he has seen before the night of the raid" nah i mean weird pj boy probably slept it away lmao i know i would
zELLOOO!! OH MAN I LOVE ZELO FROM BLOCK B THIS IS A CROSSOVER!! thank u dear author for this amazing crossover fiction
ok spoiled pyjama boy bastard son zelo green beanlo
"he pretends as if i d on't exist" but also buys me nice rich ppl pyjamas just in case a bomb raid like this happens and i need to prove to others that i am rich with just my clothing
good story! thank u for writing, dear author. i expect great things from you :)
bap forever!!!!!! xD