Hiraeth

Description

Even the kindest of souls don’t stay forever. 

Foreword

title: hiraeth
pairing: ontae, very mild onho
word count11 094 words
disclaimers: i do not own shinee
ratings: r
warnings: i did not capitalize anything sorry
summary: even the kindest of souls don’t stay forever


a/n: taemin is really uncool in here :(( i’ll write better taemins in the future. hope you enjoy! 

 

 

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hwitaeklesbian
#1
Chapter 1: it's maybe a little late but i really like this story. there's coherence in the actions of every character and even if you don't like your own portrayal of taemin, it's a very refreshing variation to always read him in every story acting uwu like this. we as a fanbase baby him too much and its very much reflected in fiction as well. your redaction skills are also great!! i hope you're still writing, for you're great at it!
StayOnyou
#2
Chapter 1: Thank you so much for writing this story, eventho I haven’t been in a relationship like this one, strangely i perfectly understand jinki’s feelings. I understand the reason he was still holding on even when it hurt so much and it made my own heart aches in turn. Aaah it will be interesting if one day you decide to write a companion fic to this, where jinki is happy of course because he really deserves it.

It was really interesting! Today is gonna be a good day because of this fic^^
BreyBrey #3
Chapter 1: Really interesting read but still not liking taemin's character here.
Thanks!
HikariLee
#4
Chapter 1: Your style of writing is amazing! it has been a long time since I have read great histories like yours, I love this whole concept of having someone but not appreciating them enough or not understanding what you have until you lost it, it's my favorite theme on stories :D I'm glad jinki went away setting himself free from that toxic love u.u what was happening with jinki's mom? excess of work or something else?

Thanks for sharing :D
Ontaethereal #5
Chapter 1: I loved your style of writing you’re so talented also the fic is so beautiful thank you so much you really did a good job
lily_bunny
#6
Chapter 1: poor jinki..his mind, body and feeling are too exhausted and numb as none try to comfort him until minho came and gave him the warm embrace with a comforting words..
taemin is a poison or drugs that once been involved it's hard to retreat..
jinki's mom decision of moving out of town is the greatest solution of saving jinki from that DRUGS..
Hyuuga_Heibe
#7
Chapter 1: You know, it's hard to hate baby Taem, but yeah, I hate him here.. What was his real issues btw?? I mean, to make me understand why he did that..
It just made me need more Onho..
Ontaeissuperreal #8
Chapter 1: It’s written beautifully i have to admit it but the ending ahh i wasn’t prepared for this
Dibidibidisn
#9
Chapter 1: WAIT WAIT WAIT WHAT HE HAD AMNESIA THE ENTIRE TIME!?!?
By the way, although the story was pure angst, the story was written so beautifully. I never knew something so sad can be written like this. You have a beautiful thing with words, I hope you know that. Also, I'll be looking forward to new works from you because they're just that good!