Chapter 2: I'm happy this ended well. I understand where Yongsun's coming from, needing that distance in order to evaluate her own feelings. I like how you spaced the sentences. Enjoyed reading this piece!
Knowing your usual endings I wasn’t expecting something like this. This of emotions and the sense of suspance, I appreciate them all. Short lines where one after another can raise the emotions of the reader and make you feel what Byul is feeling, how hurt she felt.
I can truly feel how much she loves Yong. She’s so straightforward about her heart and she collected all her courage to face Yong, not just once but twice.
Writer-nim I look forward your next work ^^ Fighting!!!
Chapter 2: From one way Yongsun really needed time to think and with that kinda distraction is really hard to understand what you really feel..
But, she should at least tell something to Byul before she distanced herself from her.. *sigh*
I am sure Byul will make her in love in herself fast. :)
Thank you for the story. ^.^
Best ideas and thoughs always comes in night time..
Chapter 2: I enjoyed your story. Not gonna lie would have wanted to know how byul will make yong fall in love with her basically the process, and then yong finally saying I love you to her (∩＿∩)
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