Fall in love at first sight

Description

SONG JIHYO is the campus goddess, who also excels in her studies. She aspires to be an online game designer/engineer, and goes by the role-playing alias of MongjiACE in the ghost online story game. After she gets dumped by her online husband Wang rin (JONGHYUN), she gets approached by the number one player SpartaKooks(Kim Jong kook) , who suggested that they get married so they both can participate in a couple competition within the game. The newly formed couple instantly hit it off, and undergo many adventures together in the game.
However, jihyo never expected the real identity of her virtual husband to be her college senior, KIM JONG KOOK who is described as the cream of the crop in both sports and academics. When jihyo discovers his true identity, they have already fallen in love with each other. Together, they overcome numerous misunderstandings and obstacles standing in their way of their budding relationship.

Foreword

This is my first time writing fanfic like this so I might do some mistake but pls let me know for correction 

If you drama lovers you guys can know which drama is this however because I really love that drama so I want to for spartace version 

Pls keep reading and you'll be more interest and pls give me so many support so I can be more confident thank you so much and I'm really appreciate it 

And there have some mistaI hope you can 

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untitledsinceday1 #1
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hlivajspartace #2
Chapter 3: Great story but still need to fix the writing bit. Thank you for writing this.???
yuxuan #3
Chapter 10: haha i always love the part where xiao nai surprise wei wei
yuxuan #4
this is love 020 right cuz when i read the part where wang ji dump her and is from online it make me think is this love 020
spadenoace #5
Chapter 7: I also think it would be helpful to have better grammar, like this is a decent story so the small things like this, fixing it would be icing on the cake you know? Also be consistent in spelling the names, is it Jihyo or Ji Hyo? Jongkook or Jong Kook?? Ive seen both of these used.

Always capitalize names Jongkook Jihyo and Taehyun etc.

Typo:
Sge [She] took a break from the game Ghost Story
spadenoace #6
Chapter 7: Wait I dont completely understand what happened here, they were fighting and then Jong Kook collapsed all of a sudden? Like in game? Or in real life? I had a little bit of difficulty determining if it was the virtual reality immersion or just playing asst your laptop like normal. The concept is very interesting, but again authornim you must assune we the readers dont really know the world for thos story since we dont know the drama.. would help if you elaborated more at times since it sometimes reads like a script ^^;
Aw the idea that JKs actions on the game makes her smile on front of her computer is so sweet though
spartace0815 #7
Nice story... Thanks authornim
Mithani #8
Chapter 9: Thanks for the updates :)
Can't wait
hidatobando #9
Chapter 5: its an interesting story, you had the idea, i like where the story goes but i am sorry chingu, i'm a bit lost with your plot and storyline. but hell, practice makes perfect. keep the effort.
anne_hessa #10
Chapter 5: Hope you will continue this fanfic until complete ?
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