Chapter 8: Oh my god! I can't stop reading this after the first chapter. It's really got me addicted. I never read something that linked to North Korea so it' s kind of excited me a bit. Anyway, i love this! Hope you update soon !
Chapter 2: Wendy...! T T I'm so anxious to find out what happened to her. Then again, they're doing some super dangerous stuff, what with crossing borders and all that. BTW, nice Johnny cameo in this chapter! It was a nice touch, haha.
Chapter 4: yo, thank you for updating!! altho this chapter was short, i still liked it! hope to see a longer one for the next chapter but take your time! :)
Chapter 1: Dude!
OK, OK, phew, let me try and breathe before I end up typing nonsensical clutter here. I happened to stumble upon this story on the front page, and seeing Taeyong as a main character in an OC fic really excited me. There actually aren't a lot of NCTxOC fics right now, so reading this one's premise had me jumping for joy.
I'm not one for military themes, but intrigued and having now just finished chapter one, I'm amazed at how well you write scenes! Especially all this military jargon and the layout of the base, man, I'm really impressed. I can imagine everything so well. Your descriptions are just long enough to tickle my imagination, and I really enjoyed everything that happened so far. Camp 127... I'm so stoked so see what's going to happen next. I'll be tackling chapter 2 soon enough, but so far, I couldn't resist sharing my thoughts, haha. Keep it up!
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