Mint Latte Review and Beta Services! (Closed until May)

Description

Do you need a beta reader to nudge you along the first draft of your fanfic, or want some feedback on an ongoing work? Either way, review shops are a great way to promote your work and improve.

Hello!! My name's Mint, I've been writing fanfic for 10 years, and I'm bored. I want to review and beta read for other authors!

Update, March 12th 2018: I've gotten pretty busy, and I plan on doing Camp Nano in April, so after I finish pending requests I will take a break until May.

Foreword

I've been writing my whole life, and I have a pretty solid grasp on what makes a good story-- fanfic or original. I'm taking a break from writing right now, but realized that I hate not being involved in the fandom at that level. So, I decided to go back to reviewing fanfic, like I used to in 2014 (of course those accounts, and probably the review shops, are now deleted). It's been a while! Click here to read examples of my work over on AO3.

Now, let's get down to business!

Rubric for reviews:

This is how I'll be scoring your fanfic if you choose a review.

TITLE --/5
DESCRIPTION/FOREWORD --/10
PLOT --/25
FLOW --/10
CHARACTERIZATION --/25
GRAMMAR/SPELLING --/25
OVERALL ENJOYMENT (BONUS POINTS) --/10
TOTAL --/100

Request Form:

Paste this into the comments to request!

Story Title:

Story Link:

Main Characters:

Story Description:

Story Type (chaptered or oneshot):

How Many Chapters? (only have to answer this if you chose 'chaptered'):

Story Status (ongoing or completed):

Rating:

Story Genre:

Anything you would like me to know? (optional):

Will not read:

Member/Reader or self-insert fics. They really aren't my thing, and it will take me forever to finish your request if it's an x reader fic.

Stories that feature explicit non-con. I will read the story of someone dealing with the trauma of non-con, but nothing more than that. Especially nothing that glorifies or izes it.

. Your fic can feature ! But, much like member/reader fics, I won't be able to get into a story that's 13 chapters of nonstop getting it on and your review will reflect that.

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Amoramer #1 May 28, 2018 20:15:17

Request Form:

Paste this into the comments to request!

Story Title: A Sunday Kind of Love

Story Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/10Bl-xDPHvGlFHn9P___mlBNjLXnOH1hq70j8-lvn4Ic/edit?usp=sharing

Main Characters: taekook

Story Description:
parents au where jeongguk had to babysit their kids
Story Type (chaptered or oneshot): one shot

Story Status (ongoing or completed): completed

Rating: PG-15

Story Genre: Fluff domestic

Anything you would like me to know? (optional):

summerdust #2 Mar 9, 2018 08:28:09

AFF or Ao3 Username:
summerdust
AFF or Ao3 Profile Link:
https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/912439
Story Title:
To Lose That Feeling
Story Link:
https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1294736/to-lose-that-feeling-angst-yoongi-bts-bangtan-jhope-suga-hoseok-sope
Main Characters:
Jung Hoseok and Min Yoongi
Story Description:
It's just a really short oneshot where Hoseok feels something strongly for Yoongi and he wants it to stay
Story Type (chaptered or oneshot):
oneshot
How Many Chapters? (only have to answer this if you chose 'chaptered'):

Story Status (ongoing or completed):
Completed
Rating:
G
Story Genre:
Angst
Anything you would like me to know? (optional):
I just want to know what people think about this kind of writing. If it was able the reader to feel something?

Thank you :)

Amoramer #3 Mar 8, 2018 03:05:59

AFF or Ao3 Username: ao3 tigertokki

AFF or Ao3 Profile Link: http://archiveofourown.org/users/tigertokki

Story Title: the nomsgraphy: eat, play, love. (still not sure if i will use this as title or not)

Story Link: (can i dm u bcs its still a draft)

Main Characters: Taehyung x Jeongguk

Story Description: au where vlogger!taekook who travel around the world together. Managing a youtube channel and instagram where they post their vlogs and photographs of their culinary trip around the world. the story is mostly about how they could be like them now.
Story Type (chaptered or oneshot): chaptered

How Many Chapters? (only have to answer this if you chose 'chaptered'): maybe 4-5

Story Status (ongoing or completed): on going

Rating: G i think

Story Genre: Fluff with mutual pinning

Anything you would like me to know? (optional): i will most likely finish each chapter within a month or two.

kamski #4 Feb 26, 2018 02:56:28

AFF or Ao3 Username: -sputnik-
AFF or Ao3 Profile Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/1432688
Story Title: beyond two highway lines
Story Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1299364
Main Characters: Donghae and Eunhyuk of Super Junior
Story Description: Hyukjae knows that Donghae is destined for greater things than him and their small town in the middle of nowhere.
That doesn't stop him from chasing and chasing and chasing.
Story Type: chaptered
How Many Chapters? (only have to answer this if you chose 'chaptered'): 2
Story Status: ongoing
Rating: pg-13
Story Genre: angst, romance, slice of life

Thank you!

blowmind1004 #5 Feb 24, 2018 06:26:34

AFF or Ao3 Username: yoonjinkook_enthusiasts

AFF or Ao3 Profile Link:https://archiveofourown.org/users/yoonjinkook_enthusiasts/pseuds/yoonjinkook_enthusiasts

Story Title: happier

Story Link:https://archiveofourown.org/works/13774944

Main Characters: jungkook and jin from bts

Story Description: jungkook and jin were a lovely couple, they're idols and they were dating secretly until one day they broke up, and jungkook and jin had to be the actors of a music video, jungkook was acted out from the script, he confessed and kisses jin when it's not even in the script.

Story Type (chaptered or oneshot):oneshot

How Many Chapters? (only have to answer this if you chose 'chaptered'):

Story Status (ongoing or completed): completed

Rating: general audience

Story Genre: angst

Anything you would like me to know?
The grammar, I'm so clueless about grammar :((( please help, and and tell me if the plot is confusing

THANK YOU ♡

Nhoxmew #6 Feb 23, 2018 03:01:07

AFF or Ao3 Username: Nhoxmew

AFF or Ao3 Profile Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/333787

Story Title: This Everlasting Devotion

Story Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/665794

Main Characters: Infinite’s Sunggyu and Woohyun (Woogyu)

Story Description: Two male gods, engaging in a love-hate relationship, caused massive chaos during a silly fight in the Holy Palace. Their actions greatly angered The Great to the point that he regretted ever choosing them as one of The Chosen Souls. What was done has been done; he could not revert his decision; instead, he decided to punish them. A punishment that will last eternally.

Story Type (chaptered or oneshot): Chaptered

How Many Chapters? (only have to answer this if you chose 'chaptered’): 18

Story Status (ongoing or completed): ongoing

Rating: …not rated? There is no :)

Story Genre: fantasy, tragedy, angst, drama, and a bit of comedy.

Anything you would like me to know? (optional): Please go easy on my grammar (it is forever a work in progress T^T) and focus more on plot/character development instead :D Constructive criticism is very much welcome. Thank you!

paula1988 #7 Feb 8, 2018 14:05:40

AFF Username:Paula1988

AFF Profile Link:http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/191907

Story Title:The confessions of a socialite's daughter

Story Link:http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1312438/the-confessions-of-a-socialite-s-daughter-joshuaxyou

Main Characters:Jihye (OC) BTS, others maybe?

Story Description:Jihye is a normal girl with celebrity parents that make it hard to live a normal life.The only problem with that normal lifestyle would be moving back to South Korea to live with her mom and her fiance, a manager of a famous kpop group. At their wedding, Jihye attracts attention for her beauty and befriending the well known BTS and other groups. Now, Jihye is more popular than ever with her famous friends and rising career in modeling. But with her past coming back to her, she doesn't know what to do with her newfound fame.

Story Type (chaptered or oneshot):chaptered

How Many Chapters? (only have to answer this if you chose 'chaptered'):Not sure yet but only chapter one so far

Story Status (ongoing or completed):ongoing

Rating:Not sure yet

Story Genre:Comdey, drama, Romance

Anything you would like me to know? (optional):I only just start the story, it's still early stage and it's in draft. I would like to have it everthing from Grammar, Plot Proofread to characterizationin I am not sure am doing the story right.