That Cheap Bathroom Soap

Description

Sometimes you get attacked by fists, sometimes by BTS visuals. 

(AKA mob boss Jeongguk saves poor college student Taehyung from a bully) 

Foreword

RIP this life and RIP overuse of commas. 

Author's Thoughts
Tomatoesarefruits
So I realize this could be the shortest thing anyone has ever read but to be fair I’m sick and also about to fall asleep so accept her please and thanks
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Olepsis #1
Oh!! I also really like the title.
Olepsis #2
Chapter 1: What. Don't ever undervalue your work like that.
You did a wonderful job with this. I particularly liked the brisk pace of the story; we get a glimpse into the kinds of people Jungkook and Taehyung are without being weighed down with details only the narrator would know.

I found it strange how they handled the bullying situation especially Jungkook. It seems to me like Taehyung had been badly hurt and yet Jungkook acts like nothing serious happened by handing Tae his number.

A pointer if I may?

You can remove the "Taehyung/Jungkook POV" parts without disrupting the story's flow. You wrote the story out in third person POV already; the POV breaks would really only be necessary if you had used first person POV.

Hope you feel better soon. & good luck writing!
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