This was amazing!
I loved it so much!
It was really sad though D:

That was beautiful D: <3

So sad):

that was beautiful ;____;<br />

Okies!! Firstly, amazing pictures!! His skin is so flawless.... *wipes drool* lol ^_-<br />
Bit of a grey OS, in comparison to sunshine and daises. Honestly speaking, I prefer these types of OS's to fluff!! A chance for more substance and depth in the story you know? <br />
I thought it was really sweet how they leaned on each other for support and how you used such simple things but left such an impact. <br />
I also really like how you used the present and flashback scenarios. Huge fan of that personally. It was so sad to see him refuse to believe his hyung at first. I would react that way too. =(( <br />
The last line.... *applause* I love it when authors leave and ending like that!! It kinda leaves it open ended, but at the same time it's so..... goose-bump worthy!! With love comes a lot of heartbreak. *sigh* <br />
I guess that's something we can't fully understand till we feel it ourselves!! <br />
Awesome job Yume. For you're age, that's very mature and good writing!! Loved this piece!! Unnie is excited to see even more!! Fighting!!! ^_^

this is really interesting.<br />
it's more like fragments of the entire picture, not in chronological order.<br />
it brings the reader to thing deeper about what happened and draw their own conclusions between the pieces.<br />
it's written very well. kudos to you! ^^

ftisland <3 ;D really nice story btw, loved the italicized (?) parts. ** idk if thats how yu spell it. xP

it was very good and sad~<br />
Pooor Seunghyun~

does the entertainment company in korea forced their artist to break up with their partner? because almost all the story I've read are like that....<br />
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so I think it must have been based on something neh?

OMG. This was totally sweet. *applause*. I think if i'd read this while listening to 'Love Love Love' by FT Island, I would have cried :(<br />
Oh well, I'l try it another time :)