Hello everyone, I’m a rookie author in aff and English is not my native language. I really really really want to improve my English language skills so I hope you guys would be kind enough to read my story and point out my mistakes.

My grammar is all over the place. be patient with me.

Point out any mistake you see whether it’s grammar, spellings or plot. I’m always open to all types of criticisms (that’s a lie please don’t be too harsh)

I would be happy to see even a single reader enjoying my works

warning : huge amount of using word “fuc*”, Implied mpreg, teen parents, irresponsible parents.

Not very otp centric..There’s like.. very little otp moments and fluff