Chapter 8

Polluted
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Mark duck under the doorway and scans the crowd. He spots his friend.

‘It’s quite rare to see you drinking.” He says.

The only response he got was the sound of a shot glass slamming onto the table. Mark sat down as Jaebum poured him a drink.

“I assume it didn’t go well.”

“It didn’t happen.”

“You didn’t tell her?”

“What can I tell her? Choose me! Choose me over the elite who can take care of you!”

“Jaebum, I know this because we’ve been friends since we were born, you have something that those elites can’t offer her.”

“Mark, she is engaged to an elite.” Jaebum take another shot. “What can I offer her? Stew and friendship?”

“Fine, fine, there is no point in talking with you when you’re drunk.” Mark signals the bartender for a glass of water. “Let get you home.”

 

London sat and waited, scanning the crowd in the bubble of hope. She laughed at herself in some way nothing has changed. It took a lot of convincing but she finally got her parent to allow her a little more freedom provided she returns by a certain time. Even issues with the curfew were sorted out; it does help when sometime when you are born into a powerful family. London clutched the key card that would allow Jaebum to move more freely. She hadn’t been able to contact him since then partially because she was busy organizing this and partially because she needed to sort out her emotions.

I can handle an unrequited love, friendship is better than the loneliness I used to feel. At least someone wants to be friends with her. At least that is the conclusion she came up with.

“What are you waiting for?” a voice whispered into her ear.

London yelped, spinning around clutching her ear.

“Jaebum!” She said hoping she didn’t look as flustered as she felt.

“Yes?” He said cocking his head to the side, “What’s up?”

“Oh, Uh, I just came to give this to you.” She said holding up the little piece of plastic.

“What is this?” he said plucking it out of her hand.

“Access card of sorts, it allows you to stay out after curfew.”

“Why would I need this?”

“So that you can come visit me!” After a second, “only if you want to or whatever.’ She added.

Jaebum examined the card, pondering the possibilities, “sure, or you can come visit me sometime.”

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!!! ATTENTION!!!
I just realized that I posted the wrong last chapter!!! I repeated chapter 19! I will fix it soon! I hope everyone sees this!

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polaroiddreams
#1
Chapter 1: oh my god. i'm looking forward to reading this!!
unknownstranger #2
Chapter 20: Thank you for the story!! Loved it!
Ten2five #3
Good story..
summerxblessings
#4
[SPOILER ALERT; Please DON'T read this comment]

I can't believe I forgot to drop a comment after I finished reading this! I was prowling through my subscriptions (because I sometimes clear them out if I lose interest in a story) but I acutely remember your story--I think I read it a month or so ago.

It was very beautiful and I also acutely remember liking your writing style! Like the person who commented below me, I think the saddest (and also the most beautiful) part of this story was that Jinyoung and our OC's fate was to meet but never be together and that he would aid her with finding Jaebum and saving him. What's wonderful about your characterization of Jinyoung is that he could have been the antagonist but he was so human and he loved her so much that he was willing to help her no matter what. I mean, that's life, right? Sometimes things happen for a reason and not everything can go our way, no matter how much you love a person and you just have to learn to let go. Thanks for this awesome story! :)
Red0302
#5
Chapter 20: This is beautiful!! I really like how the character Jinyoung was developed. He had all the elements to turn into a bad guy but he chose not to. Also, I think it was his fate to make sure that London and Jaebum would find each other and will be together ever after. His destiny was not to love London but to help her find her love. Beautiful!!
Red0302
#6
Chapter 21: Heheh... That's why I was confused but I thought maybe it's the end!!
Red0302
#7
Chapter 20: Jinyoung turns out to be a good guy actually... Goos chapter.