Chapter 4

Polluted
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After dinner, they washed the dishes, another now experience for London. When the task was completed they settled down for the night, both of them laying down staring at the ceiling trading stories and marveling at how different their lives are. It is only when they have spoken until their throats were dry and their eyes drooping did silence settle in the room, both of them wrapped in their own thoughts.
-I wish I could stay here forever.-

But how can she impose? How can she trade her own freedom for his?

-I wish she could stay here forever.-

Jaebum shakes the thoughts out of his head; he hated the thought of having to take her back, especially when he hears about the way she is, as she calls it, programmed like a robot. But how could he ask her to stay when he too was imprisoned. How could he protect her when he was a prisoner himself? How can he offer her freedom when he does not have any?

The two of them walk together towards the patrol office. He made sure to keep her close even though they were not physically touching, not to mention that they left in the early hours of the morning when there barely a few souls out. The walk was slow and quiet, neither of them knowing what to say.

“I guess this is it.” Jaebum says, stopping in front of the patrol office.

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!!! ATTENTION!!!
I just realized that I posted the wrong last chapter!!! I repeated chapter 19! I will fix it soon! I hope everyone sees this!

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polaroiddreams
#1
Chapter 1: oh my god. i'm looking forward to reading this!!
unknownstranger #2
Chapter 20: Thank you for the story!! Loved it!
Ten2five #3
Good story..
summerxblessings
#4
[SPOILER ALERT; Please DON'T read this comment]

I can't believe I forgot to drop a comment after I finished reading this! I was prowling through my subscriptions (because I sometimes clear them out if I lose interest in a story) but I acutely remember your story--I think I read it a month or so ago.

It was very beautiful and I also acutely remember liking your writing style! Like the person who commented below me, I think the saddest (and also the most beautiful) part of this story was that Jinyoung and our OC's fate was to meet but never be together and that he would aid her with finding Jaebum and saving him. What's wonderful about your characterization of Jinyoung is that he could have been the antagonist but he was so human and he loved her so much that he was willing to help her no matter what. I mean, that's life, right? Sometimes things happen for a reason and not everything can go our way, no matter how much you love a person and you just have to learn to let go. Thanks for this awesome story! :)
Red0302
#5
Chapter 20: This is beautiful!! I really like how the character Jinyoung was developed. He had all the elements to turn into a bad guy but he chose not to. Also, I think it was his fate to make sure that London and Jaebum would find each other and will be together ever after. His destiny was not to love London but to help her find her love. Beautiful!!
Red0302
#6
Chapter 21: Heheh... That's why I was confused but I thought maybe it's the end!!
Red0302
#7
Chapter 20: Jinyoung turns out to be a good guy actually... Goos chapter.