Chapter 2

Polluted
Please Subscribe to read the full chapter

She saw him.

At least that’s what she thought.

She swore, “I am an idiot.” She yells out internally, it was definitely true, what kind of idiot decides to follow a random stranger in the bubble hope on a whim. Before she knew it, she realized that she was no longer in the bubble but in the tubes, the wrong tube. She had never been in these tubes, never mind that the tube was so full of people she could barely move her arm without hitting someone. She found herself being pushed deeper into the tunnel. To make the situation more uncomfortable her presence was being noticed, after all it’s hard to miss an Elite in this tube. She bit her lip cursing at herself. She was probably going to get lost and die alone. An arm suddenly grabbed her elbow firmly stopping her in her tracks, people grumbling as the part around her like the river around a boulder. She looked up, those defiant eyes that haunt her in her dream stared back her.

“What are you doing here?”

London could not believe it, he recognized her! Only when he seemed indifferent did she realized that it was not the case. ‘I am just an elite sticking out like a sore thumb.’ she reminded herself.

“Uh, um...” She stumbled embarrassingly, “I think I am lost.”

“I guess you are.” He grinned. “We should fix that. Follow me.”

London stood there, unable to do anything, it really was him, without a doubt, she could recognize that half smile anywhere.

“Damn... “He says to the locked doors of the tube. “I swear the curfew is getting stricter every day.” He says softly to himself.

‘Curfew?” She asks, she had never heard about curfews before.

“There is a curfew for the disposables, the tubes for us works differently. He says, “It means I have to get back home soon, or those damn penalties will be the end of me.”

“Penalties?”

“Sh

Please Subscribe to read the full chapter
Like this story? Give it an Upvote!
Thank you!
Wind_rain
!!! ATTENTION!!!
I just realized that I posted the wrong last chapter!!! I repeated chapter 19! I will fix it soon! I hope everyone sees this!

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
polaroiddreams
#1
Chapter 1: oh my god. i'm looking forward to reading this!!
unknownstranger #2
Chapter 20: Thank you for the story!! Loved it!
Ten2five #3
Good story..
summerxblessings
#4
[SPOILER ALERT; Please DON'T read this comment]

I can't believe I forgot to drop a comment after I finished reading this! I was prowling through my subscriptions (because I sometimes clear them out if I lose interest in a story) but I acutely remember your story--I think I read it a month or so ago.

It was very beautiful and I also acutely remember liking your writing style! Like the person who commented below me, I think the saddest (and also the most beautiful) part of this story was that Jinyoung and our OC's fate was to meet but never be together and that he would aid her with finding Jaebum and saving him. What's wonderful about your characterization of Jinyoung is that he could have been the antagonist but he was so human and he loved her so much that he was willing to help her no matter what. I mean, that's life, right? Sometimes things happen for a reason and not everything can go our way, no matter how much you love a person and you just have to learn to let go. Thanks for this awesome story! :)
Red0302
#5
Chapter 20: This is beautiful!! I really like how the character Jinyoung was developed. He had all the elements to turn into a bad guy but he chose not to. Also, I think it was his fate to make sure that London and Jaebum would find each other and will be together ever after. His destiny was not to love London but to help her find her love. Beautiful!!
Red0302
#6
Chapter 21: Heheh... That's why I was confused but I thought maybe it's the end!!
Red0302
#7
Chapter 20: Jinyoung turns out to be a good guy actually... Goos chapter.