Knowrain Review Shop (CLOSED and working in progress)

Description

 

 

SPACES AVAILABLE: 0

 

So what's going on?: 

Hi guys~~ Knowrain here ^_^ 

Basically, as holidays had come up, i decided to do story reviews (for free!)

But! There's only 5 spaces available, so request whilst there's still time! >v<  

 

About me as a reviewer: 

I was formerly known as Moelolz.

I wouldn't call myself a harsh reviewer, but i give out honest and truthful reviews. 

My reviews tend to be longer and more detailed, and as i am more of a literature person, sometimes i like to get a little analytical and analyse your story haha. If this sort of review is your cup of tea, then by all means send me a request ^_^ 

If you are interested in the sort of format and style I review in, feel free to check out my past reviews in the link down below. 

 

Rules: 

1. Subscription is a must. Upvote is optional if you are pleased with the review :) 

2. You must credit the review in your story's foreword, i don't have a banner, so just a quick mention is ok. 

3. Fill in the form and request by copy+paste the form in the comment section below. 

4. I will not accept any /yuri/horror stories

5. If you have a long story (etc. 30 chapters+) then I may choose not to read it all but review only the first 5 chapters. 

5. Please be patient! i will aim to finish the reviews as fast as i can. 

6. Please do write a thoughtful comment after you receive your review. Not just a simple 'thank you'. 

7. Remember, this review is only my ideas and perspective on how your story can be improved. It is completely ok for you to disagree with me, but please do not be nasty and mean if you do happen to disagree with my comments.

8. I do grading on my reviews. If you do not wish for me to mark your story or you only want a certain part of your story to be reviewed, please write it in the "special requests" section of the request form.

 

 

Past reviews archive:

CLICK HERE

 

 

Status:

1. Time and Tide - Completed

2.  the color of wounds - Completed

3. The Latibule - In progress

4. Cutlass - Pending

 

 

 

 

 

 

Foreword

 

REQUEST FORM:

USER NAME: 

STORY NAME:

STORY LINK:

GENRE: 

ANY SPECIAL REQUESTS? (e.g, no grading, which part of the rubric would you like me to focus on?)

 

RUBRIC:

Story Title: (5)

Description and Foreword:(10)

Characterization:(20)

Plot and consistency:(40)

Grammar and Writing style:(20)

Reviewer's enjoyment:(5)
 

Total: mark/100

 

 

With all that said, enjoy your review :) 

 

 

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YamieX
#1

USER NAME: Yamiex
STORY NAME: Living Lies
STORY LINK: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/812321
Story trailer: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q9lSZcVM4uI
GENRE: Mystery, Humour with a hint of Romance
ANY SPECIAL REQUESTS? Plots if possible? This is a Japanese drama crossover feat Kindaichi Case Files Neo & ST Aka to Shiro no Sousa File.
amusingmurdermachine
#2
Thank you so much for the review! I already credited you at the story's foreword :)
stellarstarlight
#3
I've always been curious about review shops. I could never do it myself. If you don't mind my asking, how did you come up with your rubric?
sooyoung2345
#4
I've credited the shop! Once again, thank you so much for the review ;-;
jaxial
#5
USER NAME: LUVkookietae
STORY NAME: Tainted
STORY LINK: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1274194/tainted-angst-fantasy-japanese-supernatural-alternateuniverse-darkromance-greekmythology-fantasyau-bts-supernaturalau-clash-bangtanboys-jungkook-taehyung-kimtaehyung-darklove-btsv-jeonjungkook-taekook-bangtansonyeondan-slightgore-kitsune-vkook-lovelessromance-kookv-taehyungxjungkook
GENRE: Angst, Fantasy, Historical(?),
ANY SPECIAL REQUESTS? (e.g, no grading, which part of the rubric would you like me to focus on?) Plot Flow and Characterization. There might be a few major plot holes but please don't focus on that.
Emilieee
#6
USER NAME: Emilieee
STORY NAME: Cutlass
STORY LINK: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1248550/cutlass-action-fantasy-romance-exo-baekhyun-pirateau
GENRE: fantasy, romance, action, pirate!au
ANY SPECIAL REQUESTS? Nope, but thanks in advance :)
amusingmurdermachine
#7
USER NAME: amusingmurdermachine
STORY NAME: say yes
STORY LINK: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1035016/say-yes-fluff-krystal-chanyeol-chanstal
GENRE: romance, fluff, comedy
ANY SPECIAL REQUESTS? no grading please :)
amusingmurdermachine
#8
Hi, I was wondering if I'm eligible for another request? :) I kinda want to have another one of my stories reviewed...
amusingmurdermachine
#9
Hi ^^
USER NAME: amusingmurdermachine
STORY NAME: the color of wounds
STORY LINK: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1251267/1/tales-of-the-commons-and-of-the-strange-drabble-collection-drabbles-request-exo-kai-sehun-bts-jungkook
GENRE: angst
ANY SPECIAL REQUESTS? no grading please :)