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"Take responsibility." Park Hyun-Sung cries, "Say what you did to my daughter. In front of your wife and father, I want to hear you say the truth – just once."

I can feel the room tightening like a noose around my neck, and it's all this girl's fault. I have never seen this girl before. But, then, out the corner of my eye, I see Chaerin; for one moment, she has a look of horror at the accusation. Does she believe this girl?

"It's a…a mistake," I'm stammering.

Chanyeol is indignant, "This is ridiculous. Get these mad people out of here. Better yet, call the cops on them!" 

Dara raises a shaking finger and points, "Him. He – me." she didn't lower her eyes. I thought she would, but she stares at me with a fierceness that lets me know just how much she hates me.

"Dad. It's a mistake. I would never do something like that." I'm begging my family to believe me. It's the worst accusation that someone can make. I have a wife, a daughter – I would never do something like that.

But I can feel everyone's eyes on me,

They're wondering if it's possible,

Did I this girl called Dara?


"I didn't know how perfect my life was until that fated day that strange and scared girl entered my life." – Jiyong.

"I believe my husband is a good man. I still love my husband - And I hate HER!" – Chaerin

"Those people knew how to use their power to hurt others." – Dara

"Life is for making use of what God chose to give me." – Chanyeol


Now meet our hallelujah Cast!


   


NOTE

Oh my God, oh my God! This will be hard for me because I'm using the two most powerful ships of K-Pop SkyDragon, and Daragon. I'm not confident with my writing skills, but I have finally decided to write it, but it doesn't mean that I'm perfectly ready to write it. I lack many things, and I'm afraid my story didn't match your expectations. I'm sure you guys must have so many expectations from me because of the main cast. However, I will try my best to balance both ships. 


Let me tell you guys one thing this story is not going to be M-Rated but still, I'm giving you WARNING! Because this story is not about rom-com, it will be based on Polygamy, , ual abuse, Child abuse, and the age difference (18 years). Yes, you have read it right; if you guys aren't comfortable with the plot, this one is not for you. So, please don't waste your time here or come here to bash me. I'm humbly requesting you not to report the story if you guys found any issue. Thank you~♦

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Original Story by Moon-Walker. This story is entirely based on my imagination; if you see anything similar to another story, it's just a coincidence. I do not own the characters; I have changed the ages and the names of most of the characters according to the story's plot.


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PUBLISH DATE : SEP 27, 2017   STARTING DATE : NOV 01,2020    ENDING DATE : ______/ _____

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Tariki_inday #1
Chapter 6: don't stop writing authorim...you are very talented... hope ur doing fine... i thought i cant get the update anymore... i luv to read it again... 😊😊😊
Teneky
671 streak #2
Chapter 6: ✨💗✨💗✨

He is surely in a difficult situation as he faces it all and some facts come to life. It is true that dealing with everything that was about to happen and it will be hard for him to face others, family and friends especially. Every action has a reaction, there is no doubt about that, but we'll see what's the catch, in the end. Things can be manufactured. Hmm. 👀

*sighs* His wife is in a huge dilemma, and it's obvious that she doesn't know what to do. This whole situation is crazy... I mean, if I were in her shoes, I would probably react the same... if it were my husband and he did the same... supporting him would be difficult... so I don't know... Everyone is different. 👀👀

Things are getting more and more complicated for all of them, but that's what I like about this story! It keeps the attention and if one focuses, it's easy to understand! 👌✔

Thank you and I can't wait to see what happens next! 💗🌹

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Teneky
671 streak #3
Chapter 5: ✨💗✨💗✨

In a way, I can understand his wife and the thoughts that were going through her mind so her behavior, as I mentioned earlier, is normal. Such accusations are never easy to handle or deal with, let alone when the person accused is your husband. the father of your child. The person with whom you share a bed, but the events that followed afterward caught me off guard a bit. The conversation she had and what she was told, how her husband stood up for her after everything that had happened, really hit her spot and she was able to snap out of it. *smiles * I'm impressed.
But it only goes to prove that not everything is as it seems and all the characters here have a story to tell. *winks* This confirms my first thought, that there was more to this family than one could imagine!

So far Chanyeol is doing his part in the investigation, but this is going to be tiring, from what I can conclude since there are things that are not being said. Hmm. Let's see how this develops. *smirks*

*blinks in shock* Blackmailing? Really? That is a big NO! Things are getting heated that's for sure, but I love the way it keeps my attention!

Thank you! 💗🌹Another great chapter! 👌✔ Can't wait to see what happens next!

P.S - Sorry, I didn't have much time to read for the past two days, but I am back now. 💗🌹

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Daraxxi_2Ne1 #4
Chapter 6: Thanks for updating. The plot is interesting that's why we keep checking for updates in your story. A lot of secrets will unravel in each character. I think all of them have certain secrets. I'm looking forward to what will happen to Dara and Jiyong and the rest of the characters.
corea18
#5
Chapter 6: More twist and drama authornim
Teneky
671 streak #6
Chapter 2: ✨💗✨💗✨

Surely, such things are not pleasant to hear for any family, especially if that person has a wife and daughter. I can actually understand his wife and her reaction. It's hard to know who to trust, of course, she had lived with her husband and one would think that she knows him well, but that doesn't actually mean anything. There are cases where people lived with their spouse for years and in the end, they find out that they had no idea about their spouse's true face. *sighs* 👀😱😨

I feel sorry for his wife. *sighs* It's normal for her to feel that way. What woman wouldn't, right? *shakes head*

It surely threw everyone off their tracks and it's no wonder that Chanyeol is zoning out, thinking about everything. Did he do it? Did he not do it? One starts doubting everything and it's crazy. It goes to show that one's life can change overnight for 360 degrees and there is nothing one can do about it, but try to calm down and come to the bottom of it.

Dara is surely persistent in making them pay. But who wouldn't be, right? It's not going to be easy, because r*pe is difficult to prove (My major was Criminal Psychology and Psychology), and based on my experience the victims of r*pe go through hell. *sighs* It's not pretty but I hope that things will go well for Dara in the end and justice will win. If Jiyong really did that then he needs to pay. If he didn't, the real culprit must be caught.

Chanyeol's reactions... at times he confuses me. In a way, it seems that he is happy that his brother is in trouble and at times he seems worried. I would say there is some rivalry between them? Hmm. I might be wrong, we'll see. That's just based on what I noticed. 👀👀

Those who know him, partly believe in his incense and partly they are doubting it all. Things are getting interesting. 👌✔

His father has a point, an investigation needs to be done. 👌✔

I can't wait to see what happens next!
Thank you! ✨💗🌹👌✔

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corea18
#7
Chapter 6: Welcome back authornim
Teneky
671 streak #8
Chapter 1: ✨💗✨💗✨

Interesting: 👌✔

Characters: 👌✔

Keeps the attention: 👌✔

Intense: 👌✔

I love the first part of this one. The Kwon family has surely caught my attention at this point and their ties with the government, all that makes me wonder about their background and what else will be revealed about them and their ties inside and outside the family. Also, there was a situation with Chanyeol being drunk right away, learning that he is Jiyoung's half-brother and Nana is Chanyeol's future wife. But there is surely more to the relationship between the two half brothers, but we'll see. ✔👌😉 So far, so good. 😉 (I'm a er for Chanyeol *drools*)

I could literally imagine his wardrobe and the collection he has. It suits him well. 👌😉😍 But I adored his state of panic and how he described the way his father will react if he doesn't show up. Then the wake-up scene was quite something and Nana's reaction to it. 👌✔ Loved it!

Things escalated fast! *blinks* 👀😱😨😰 With Dara's appearance everything changed and surely her pointing at Jiyoung that he r*ped her came as a surprise to everyone. It's only the first chapter so I am not sure which side to take, so for now, I will be neutral. Either way, the act itself is hideous and NO WOMAN deserves that. A no is a no.

Thank you for this chapter! ✨💗🌹👌✔

Can't wait to see what happens next! 👀

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Teneky
671 streak #9
Something tells me that this will be a great fic as well! UGH, I need a vacation where I can read all day long. XD

Can't wait! <333