Forever

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Will Minkyung take care of Yebin forever?

 

Foreword

Hi friends! Just a one-shot on Minkyung and Yebin! It is also a story dedicated to one of my readers, jungbomi, for making the request! Enjoy guys! ^^ My first time writing Minkyebin fic so please pardon me if the feel isn't there >< Enjoy!!! ^^

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plenguinn #1
Chapter 1: It's so cute when they together even in fiction :)
awwww my heart<3
Jun_2388 #2
Chapter 1: I thought it will be an angst... But gladly it's not
evylrss #3
Chapter 1: Omooooooo
So sweet and soft
Thank you author nim
onereelier #4
Chapter 1: i need minkyebin so bad and u came giving me this fic OMG LOVE U SO MUCH!! <3
MyouiHiraiDorkytae #5
You said you finally write Minkyung's first name correctly. What did you use before, authornim? I was curious. Haha because at first i also kept saying Kang Minkyung instead of Kim because i like Davichi and one of the duo named Kang Minkyung. Haha and her nickname is also Minky. And somehow Kim Minkyunh kind of resembled Kang Minkyung in my eyes at first. And the way Minkyung smile/grin remind me of Kim Dani.
fxdeliciouz #6
Chapter 1: aww minkyung is so sweet with yebin, I loved it <3
they should just live together lol
I needed a little minkyebin fluff
really good read c:
jungbomi #7
Chapter 1: First of all I LIKE IT... hehe thank you for making it kiddo

Im thirsty for Minkyebin hoho~ and you make me less thirsty:))) . For the first time Minkyebin story? IT’S GOOODDDDD make it more~
2-get-her #8
Chapter 1: This isn't bad it's cute ^^ but there are some writing issues I'd like to address if it's okay, I understand you were doing texts through the story, so I understand the caps-lock, but it does get a little frustrating to see things like that, but that's just a personal opinion. Using Romanianized Korean is a bit annoying for things like "pabo" which literally means idiot. but Unnie, I understand it since English doesn't have a direct word that means the same thing as it. Whenever writing dialogue you can end dialogue that is a question with a question mark, but if it doesn't have a question mark end it with a "," you only didn't end it with that a couple of times though, so it's just a nit-pick tbh.

Also sometimes I think you used "Leaving" when you meant "living" I figure you just might not have noticed it while writing, but hey we all make mistakes and everyone can improve their writing, so I hope this doesn't come off as rude because I definitely don't mean to ^^
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