Dear contestant, your story was quite peculiar to begin with. The idea and concept of a heart transplantation’s effects on a certain person and her relationships is not something that we can easily find among other stories. It was even more interesting since you wrote it canon compliant so we could see Day6 as a band and we could see behind those heartbreaking song that Young K wrote. I love how we could see the whole story through his eyes, how he saw the girl and how his feelings changed. It was very refreshing after all the tropes. To be honest, sometimes I was a bit confused, who talk with who and why (after the 1st chapter I kind of forget about Mina and their friendship, poor her) and where this whole story is going but you wrapped it up really nicely at the end. I’m glad that the love line wasn’t cliché either. Despite not disliking the main girl, I rather found a liking for the girl who worked in the hospital and I’m happy they kind of ended up together or so it seems. The open ending is a hopeful one after so much pain in the story. I liked the frame and how you used certain recurring symbols. Young K’s character was a really complex one but maybe because of the constant change of Bomi’s behaviour I couldn’t help but not feel real connection between him and her. It felt more like guilt and less than love. That’s why I’m happy they didn’t end up together but on the other hand the girl was nice and just wanted to be a good girl, so she wasn’t the usual cliché like in most stories. Your flow was really nice, the chapters were well structured, some of your expressions were a bit too forced but nothing too bad. The title was really nice too but sadly I didn’t get its connection to the story until the very last chapter. I’m not sure if the first chapter would have convinced me to continue to be honest but I’m glad it’s for the contest because what came after would have been a pity to not read. All in all, it was a really interesting story, a rollercoaster of emotions and congratulations for finishing such a monster length story! Thank you for entering our contest! Good luck with your future writings!

Chapter 7: Lady, kudos to you finishing this story. I loved every single chapter, every single bit of it from the bottom of my heart - especially since I know of the crazy amount of effort that you put into writing these story, something that isn't your native language. Seonhee's line though XD "don't make me wait another year" gosh I loved that! But above all I treasure the message of your story the most: that no matter the heartbreak people have the ability to love again and that life doesn't give you what you want, but what you need instead. I think that really helped put my life into perspective, especially when things don't go my way. It is stories like this that teach me it's possible to keep going because there's a plan out there for me - as long as I work hard and keep going, something worthy is bound to come out of it.

Once again, as a reader, I thank you so much for this story because this bittersweet ride has taught me more than I ever knew.

Merry Christmas and happy holidays! <3

Chapter 6: Man this went from hero to zero real quickly! Why the sudden change in heart? Each chapters leave me with more questions and answers to discover but I'm going to keep reading to find out! As usual, amazing job right here - you're truly a gem! :D

Chapter 5: Oh gosh I have my own theories about this story but I shall not say it here because spoiler alert!! But this was amazing and you're right, I loved the 1st part so much <3 but with this new addition I'm more and more curious about what happens next, can't wait!!

Chapter 4: The moment I saw that this was updated, I clicked without hesitation and once again, you don't dissapoint. Wonderfully crafted and now I understand why she did what she did. But her crush on Younghyun though!! How is that going to progress? And his see you again!! That promise to meet again has me tingling with anticipation! Can't wait to read more and you have a great day :) stay warm too ^^

Chapter 3: THIS TORE ME APART. How on earth is it possible to have a good storyline, good vocab and compelling characters?? Now I wanna know Seonhee's role in all this too!! You can't leave me hanging like this - I need another chapter AHFINGIDNB Anyways great job on this one too!! (And yay I get special mention heh XD)

Chapter 2: This looks extremely promising. I liked how you've began to set the stage and I can't wait to find out more about Bomi! :)