Planet Mars

The Sun, The Moon and The Earth
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During most lunchtimes, Suzy would spend it with Myungsoo, his new sister, Soojung, Eunji and then some of Myungsoo’s new friends. He was quite a popular fellow, despite his quiet demeanour, and his tendency to have sarcastic remarks. Plus, he engaged himself in books and picked up the guitar (which Hongbin was also fond of when he discovered Myungsoo’s passion). One thing was clear, and that was that Suzy and Myungsoo spent less and less time in the orphanage.

    Suzy admitted that she sorely missed Hongbin and Jongin. It was not the same without them. There was no way that anyone could outshine Hongbin’s sunny personality, and nobody made her laugh as did Jongin. They kept in touch via letters, especially Myungsoo, since his new family abhorred the mention of the orphanage. Poor Mr. Kitty- would roam the empty gardens to search for the Moon, that one kid who was most like him, but the cat met empty dead-ends.

    Myungsoo was becoming too popular for school. He was attracting fanclubs, and by the time he would reach High School, he would become a star, an idealistic figure for the young and the old.

 

From Myungsoo to Jongin and Hongbin:

How are you both? It’s been awhile, and I’m sorry for not spending more time with you. I admit that I miss the times we went exploring for treasure. I’m sorry I missed your eighth birthday, Jongin, and your ninth, Hongbin.

Don’t think I’ve forgotten that we’re still friends. As for Suzy, she is getting on great at school. I want the two of you to study well so that we could all end up in the same college. I would try to come down to the orphanage more, but my family is always busy.

Stay in touch,

Myugsoo.

 

Suzy read the letter. She was with Hongbin and Jongin that day, after handing them the cards to her eighth birthday. Mr. Kitty- was sleeping in his little basket by the old oak tree. The winter was coming early that year, and it was so cold coming into September.

    “So Myungsoo has no time for us anymore?” Jongin scrunched his nose. “That’s ridiculous! It’s like he doesn’t care anymore.”

        “Well, he has a family now,” said Hongbin, scratching his chin. “It’s different when you have a family. Right, Suzy?”

Suzy sniffled, feeling the heat creeping up her neck. She would often find her mother staring out of the window at times, and sometimes, she would come with Suzy to the orphanage to talk to Hongbin. However, the notion of adopting him was never brought up again. She did not know if Hongbin ever forgot about the day she argued with him. Such a thought left her embarrassed.

    “He’s coming to my birthday. I want to introduce you guys to my friends.”

“Could we bring Kyungsoo and Chanyeol?”

    Suzy perked a brow. “Who?”

“Kyungsoo and Chanyeol,” repeated Jongin.

    “They’re our friends. We play cricket and soccer together,” said Hongbin.

“They’re nicer than Myungsoo,” added Jongin, not hiding the bitterness when he uttered his forgotten friend’s name. “At least they didn’t abandon us.”

    “Myungsoo never abandoned us,” said Hongbin, gasping in shock. “He’s just too busy.”

“Guess he has his priorities.” Jongin spat at his feet. “Who needs him anyways. So can I bring Kyungsoo and Chanyeol?”

    Suzy did not understand why the thought of Myungsoo’s absence hurt her. Perhaps the time they spent together at school filled in the loneliness that Jongin and Hongbin must have felt. Without the Moon, there was nothing to pull their tides, and link together their gravitational magnitudes.

“But I don’t know

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Han_Jaeri
#1
Chapter 2: I scrolled down to the comments and accidentally read a spoiler huhu :’)) is this the consequence of my own foolish actions?

PS: I really love your writing style so far! You’ve managed to capture the innocence of childhood and nostalgia through your writing. I have a feeling I’d be heartbroken by the end of the story, but I’ll continue reading it nonetheless :’D
anitaklr24
#2
Chapter 37: It would be awesome If you publish this story!
It has a lot of potencial!
Your writing style, the storyline and the characters are awesome. It is a story that make me think a lot. You know how much I love this for my comments.

I would be a pleasure if I could buy a copy of this story!
Have a great day!
I miss you.
Hope everything is good in your life!
Hugs ^^,
asianunknown
#3
Hi there! I really like this story and I just wanted to know if it's okay for me to make a song based on this story. I'll definitely credit you and if needed I will pay. Thank you and have a great day!
SkullMaki
#4
Chapter 36: I’m soooo shocked...seriously....I was so happy when the chapter started with Suzy and myungsoo getting married and even having child but everything turned to horror when I found out that he died TT I seriously never expected that ? can’t we get a prologue plz?
rojan143suzy #5
Chapter 36: Now that it has ended, I feel so lost. I loved the story throughout where every character had flaws completing each other. I could never make a choice between Hongbin and Myungsoo. So can imagine how it must have been to you. Thank you for penning it so beautifully authornim. Being a diehard Suzy fan, I was pulled here and I'm super glad I read it all.
CcKittyCat
#6
Chapter 36: Omg wow, this story is just a rollercoster of emotions ... I love it! Thank you so much for writing this story!
Shanwreeb
#7
Chapter 36: This story has been amazing from the beginning. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. You are a very talented author. Please keep writing! I'll keep reading! ;)
anitaklr24
#8
Chapter 36: I am crying a little bit for the ending. I agree with you about Myungsoo and Hongbin.
Myungsoo were the one who help them in a way stay together, but just like you say he would have distanced himself.
In the end, Hongbin and Jongin fulfilled Myungsoo's wishes.

I laughed about the name of Suzy's kitten.

To me, the ending was perfect. Even if my favorite was Myungsoo. jajaja you know why. jajaja

I will look forward to the next stories that you write.

Thank you so much for this story. It was realistic.

Have a great day!
Hugs.
adiezty #9
Chapter 36: Thank youuu dear..you know I love this story and always waiting you for upadate..
well I don't mind if suzy still paired with Idol ..hehehe