Clockwork Reviews and Tutorials [BUSY]

Description

This is a no fuss, straightforward shop that provides in-depth reviews

All non-native English speakers, beginners, and experienced writers are welcome.

Do not hesitate to request help.

 

Shop Status: BUSY

 

Open = Pending spots open. Requests will be accepted.

Busy = No Pending spots open (Maximum of 3).

Closed = Not taking any requests.

 


 

Review Rubric

Fanfiction Review vs. Serious Review

[ Writing Scenes Tutorials (by request) ]

 

**For samples of my writing, please click here 

Please note, I am by no means an expert writer. I'm simply offering one perspective developed from years of writing for fun, school, and work. 

 


 

Rules

1. Fill the form out properly and post it in the Comments Section. Subscribing is not necessary.

2. 50,000 words is my Maximum Limit on story length. If your story is longer than that, select chapter/sections you want me to review. I will not review beyond that word limit. 

3. If you ever want clarifications for the review I have given you, don't hesitate to ask.

4. If you are unhappy with your score, message me to discuss it.

5. Please refrain from requesting a review, if your story is predominantly mindless . If I find that it is, I will have to deny the request.   

 


 

 

Foreword

 

REVIEW STATUS

Pending (Max. 3)

Unfaithful by baetaetae

Unfaithful by JLawch

Counting Down by Flawless-94 

 

Completed

The Longest Night by TEZMiSo

Hot Streak by ohhhkenneth

My Lovely Lee Byunghun by kamikazexoxo

My Name is Her by Pandoralacey

Chenderella by fefedove

Dirty by Jackson00

by Losses on the Day which Fire Blazed Junyoshi

Warflower by ErisChaotica

Saving a Smile by genieforyou14

Everyday is a Sunday Evening by Maudmoonshine

Our Personal Arithmetic by Ataraxy

Taehun's Dying Wishes by Paula1988

That Bastard by MissTangerine

Abominable by TheLaughingKirby

The Irreversible Beguilement by Tantk11

I'm Yours by MissTangerine
High School with Famous Idols by KPopLoverrr22

ual Encounters by Shaza_BigBang_

Zugzwang, Zwischenzug by Changcheree

Our {Naughty} Little Maknaes ♡ by LEETAEMINTLOVE

Trapped!.. In The Kingdom Of The Forbidden Romance by Chae_Ri08

Ends With Me by 4klover

by Baby Baby~ keishota

by Undeniable Love of a Vampire turtlejusz

by 1234 Life is Never Normal cve

by 1234 The Black Viper Host Clubcve

by 1234 You Drove Me To This cve

by 1234 Love Isn't Blindcve

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Spotted Love by  junyoshi

by Destiny of Love sulliviera

by Changing Illusion into RealityJunyoshi

Covetous by ReddyHong

 

 

 

 

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Xophias
#1
Chapter 2: I'm quite impressed by how you do your review in such a deepth analyze! I will make sure to come here for a review soon!
TEZMiSo
#2
Chapter 44: I'd just like to say a massive thank you for such an in-depth review! You're totally right about using this story specifically as an outlet for experimentation for my serious work. It's more been a test to see how self-indulgent my prose can become without being tethered to proper storylines or fleshed-out characters (hence the threadbare plot). As if turns out: pretty indulgent in places, and I'm glad you've pointed that out, since re-reading the first four chapters especially, it comes across in places as a little too descriptive for description's sake. And to answer another few quick questions - the events surrounding the apocalyptic event are deliberately vague, as I prefer readers to make their own assumptions rather than spell it out (is it nuclear war? A supervolcano? etc.), Irene and the others saw the state of Seulgi etc. and drew them in out of compassion (so to say, they knew they were "armed", but not armed and dangerous, haha), Seulgi actually has a foot infection, which is fleshed out in Chapters 10 and (especially) 11 and 12, which are WIP, although it could definitely be more pronounced in the early chapters, and the glass/plastic bags is a silly plothole I'm already editing haha.

I'd just like to say once again, thank you for such a fantastic review! It means a lot!
Pingdwae
#3
Chapter 3: Username: JLawch

Story Title: Unfaithful

Story Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1207264/unfaithful-angst-cheating-drama-mpreg-hunhan-baekyeol-chanlu

Area of Help: Do you think my story has a lot of loopholes and is it too hard to get a grip of the whole plot line? Was i conveying the right emotions for every scenes? Is the story moving so slow? I really want to know your in depth thoughts about my characters and their relationship with one another. Most of all, please do not hesitate to point out the flaws of the story. It’s okay to be brutally honest and I don’t mind. I just badly want to improve. Thank you!

Review Type: Serious Review


Specifications: Please please do point out every flaws and error that you will see and your brutal thoughts and feelings for their characterizations.


Thank you so sooo much if you are going to accept this <3 Have a nice day!
TEZMiSo
#4
Username: TEZMiSo

Story Title: The Longest Night

Story Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1326292/the-longest-night-dark-horror-seulgi-yeri-joy-postapocalyptic-wendy-slowbuild-irene-redvelvet-seulrene

Area of Help: No help really needed, just looking for feedback and reviews, although the first two chapters are extremely rough and will need revising at some point.

Review Type: Serious

Specifications: I have a very specific prose style (I grew up with McCarthy and Faulknerisms to an insane degree) and would prefer feedback on the prose if nothing else, since the neologisms and compounds are very much a part of my style of writing and I wonder how they come across to people outside my lit circle. Any sort of overall review is more than welcome. Thank you :)
fefedove
#5
Chapter 41: Woah you were the first review store I used back when I was a newbie here. I'm so excited~~~
chanbob 102 streak #6
I'm so happy that you are open again. your reviews are awesome.
Ohhhkenneth
#7
Username: ohhhkenneth

Story Title: Hot Streak

Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1061397/hot-streak-texting-jimin-bts-bangtanboys-jungkook-jikook-snapchat

Area of Help: This is a completed story; however, I'm curious to get feedback about ways in which I can improve it in any way.

Review Type: Serious

Specifications: I know this story is not perfect at ALL, and I'm wondering what I can do to make it that much better. I never re-read the I write so I often find myself seeing typos and grammar mistakes here and there. Please let me know how the story reads to you, and how it can be better - also, if you find any mechanical errors, please let me know what I should change. :)

Why do you want this review? I have never had a story of mine reviewed thus far, and I've written quite a few. Not only am I curious as to what they will look like stacked against a rubric, but also I'm always looking to improve as a writer, and any feedback (good or bad) is appreciated. :)