Sweet Kisses

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A modern take on SoSoo's breakup, from episodes 18 - 19, with some much needed modern-day twists.

This work was inspired by a lot of things. I ask for patience, please read until the end to know the full story.

Foreword

He watched her from dusk until dawn. He watched her as the first light slowly filtered in through the thick curtains, barely enough to break into the cool darkness of the previous night. Like a timer, it woke her. He closed his eyes and felt her move out of bed.

When next he opened them, she was gone.

Author's Thoughts
ScarletBerry
Song lyrics taken from the song Holding Back the Tears by 동방신기
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Posh_Kitty #1
Chapter 5: Haaaaaallelujah
Posh_Kitty #2
Chapter 4: Oh thank gimbap. All has been restored in the universe
Posh_Kitty #3
Chapter 3: Writernim why? This is evil and torture
Posh_Kitty #4
Chapter 2: Are you trying to break my heart and steal my soul. The drama already di that and I only got them back now
Posh_Kitty #5
Chapter 1: I'm scared. I'm not sure if I want more heartache if this is what's happening here.
Denisecynth #6
Chapter 5: I just read your Author's Note on the comments and it's obvious that you have seen this drama a thousand times (am I right or am I right? haha jk). Not that I'm complaining. You love Moon Lovers and I love you for loving it and creating fanfictions. You are a blessing to the fans ❤️❤️
Denisecynth #7
Chapter 5: All the feels for this story. Wow! That was such a great read. I felt sad, anxious, loved, happy, angry, and happy again. The way you craft words into sentences is so wonderful. The emotions feel so real. My heart ached and it also thumped. Truly beautiful, beautiful writing and work. ❤️ SoSoo forevs ?
ScarletBerry #8
Chapter 5: Notes:
1. Soo's terrible porridge-making skills: she made Lady Oh porridge in the drama, and the latter was not impressed. I may have exaggerated it a bit in this fic for the sake of fluff :D
2. Ji Mong mentioned Won was interested in chemistry, which is where I got inspiration for the drugging :D
3. In the drama, Yo was described as someone who loved to exploit peoples' weaknesses.
4. On the subject of "cheating", now you all know he was drugged :D this means he was not fully conscious when Yeonhwa tried to him. and cheating are tricky subjects, but it is my belief that the blame in cases such as this should not be on the victim. He did not drink the drugs willingly, so there really was no consent between them. He was tricked, used and manipulated. If you feel differently, then I'm sorry but we'll just have to agree to disagree (ˉ(∞)ˉ)V
5. Lots of easter eggs in the conversations! Were you able to spot any familiar lines and parallel events?

As for the rest of the unspoken plot and future... I leave it to your colorful imagination.

This was written in a span of 3 days, so do forgive any mistakes.

Additional fluff between SoSoo towards the end written for BubbleTurtle because I'm supposed to be good to her so she won't break my heart in her fic Fate's Shadow (which is a good read, if you haven't read it yet). I made So grovel! Though probably not in the way you wanted or expected, but still... mercy, sunbae!!

Also, I know I said it was a modern version of SoSoo's breakup, but I couldn't bring myself to give them the same ending, even in my depressed, tired state, so... tada! Happy ending for everyone! (sort of)

Thank you to everyone who stuck around and took the time to comment and/or leave a kudos, as well as for the suggestions and reactions! I actually had to edit some parts according to the comments, and I think the story turned out better because of it. So thank you!

Lastly, I'm sorry for the anxiety and heartache I may have caused (hehe).

A pleasant day to all!
davian #9
Chapter 4: this is nice and beautiful
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