The Fault of Perfection | OSH

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**This is a SehunxOC fic**

‘A loved one is someone who you’re comfortable with, who you don’t mind showing your flaws to. But a loved one is also someone who you strive to be perfect for, because you know they’re worth it.’

-Anonymous

His sharp, cold eyes scanned the rows of trainees, his gaze hard and unforgiving.

They were a pathetic bunch, but that was only to be expected. They were just trainees, after all. He was sure that after a few months, they'd begin to harden - they always did. Standing next to him, his tall cousin gave all the trainees a warm smile which a few of them returned. The young captain remained stoic and cool, however - like he always was. 

He watched as each of the trainees stiffened as they met his gaze, immediately lowering their eyes to the floor. He didn't care - in fact, he preferred it this way. The more scared of him they were, the better they'd listen, the faster they'd become the soldiers he wanted them to be. 

Oh Sehun was a perfectionist - he strived for perfection in every way possible, refusing accepting flaws or weaknesses in any form. He didn't believe in the notion that 'nothing was perfect'. He demanded perfection from himself and everyone around him, and, while it was tiring, he saw it as just a way of life. To him, there was nothing more satisfying than the faultless and the impeccable.  

And yet, when his gaze landed on her, her innocent eyes locking with his own dark ones, something rose in his chest. A strange feeling of familiarity and...something else. Apprehension, perhaps, or maybe just anticipation. He really didn't know.

All he knew was that his perfect world was about to change.

The war between North and South Korea rages on and its effects are seen everywhere.

Park Chaeyoung is just an ordinary girl with an ordinary life in South Korea, but certain events see her enrolling in the military despite her diminutive strength and size. She doesn't know what to expect while training as a cadet, but she certainly doesn't expect someone like Oh Sehun entering her life, with his cold and less-than-likeable personality, harsh comments and ridiculously high expectations.

But she also doesn't expect forming strong friendships with unlikely people, overcoming impossible hardships and even... falling in love.

Unfortunately, life is seldom easy and is often unpredictable in the most dangerous of ways.

As beautiful as life is, it is also fragile and easily shattered.

Even the strongest will eventually fall.

 

 

Foreword

Starring:

Oh Sehun - cousin of Park Chanyeol and grandson of Oh Jinhyuk, a famous military leader. He's cold, sharp and incredibly smart, not to mention a fighting prodigy. He's been involved in the military since young and was promoted to Lieutenant at age 18. He's certainly not the most amiable fellow and can be fairly reserved and intimidating. He is currently 25 years old and his hobbies include reading mystery and historical fiction novels, fighting, drinking coffee and being an in general. 

 

Park Chaeyoung - a naive, air-headed and cheerful girl who grew up in a small town near Seoul. She moved to the city when she was 15 with her mother and two brothers where they opened a small but successful cafe. She's very soft-hearted and kind but has a fairly witty sense of humour and a surprisingly smart mouth. She appears easily intimidated and weak-willed at first but she's capable of holding her own ground, especially if one of her loved ones are being threatened. Her hobbies include reading sappy romance novels and watching cliche romance dramas, listening to music and taking walks in the rain. She's 23 when she decides to join the military for certain reasons. 

 

Park Chanyeol - a dorky goofball who just needs a hug. Currently 26, he's also a well-known figure in the military and Sehun's cousin. However, due to his friendly disposition, he isn't as feared as his cousin and much more approachable. Don't get me wrong though, he could still beat your up if you hurt any of his friends. He can also be serious and intimidating when he needs to be, but those occasions usually only come once in a blue moon. He likes basketball, Rilakumma and memes. He doesn't mind that Sehun is more famous than him and is proud of his best friend. He also likes annoying the hell out of Sehun just for fun, because he obviously doesn't know death even when it's standing in front of him, glaring at him because he stole it's favourite pen and forgot to return it. 

 

WARNING: This is a military!AU fic, which means war, conflict/violence, death and other sensitive topics will/may be mentioned. If you are uncomfortable with these sorts of things or are sensitive to them, I advise you to approach with caution.There won't be anything too graphic and most likely not enough to be rated M, but their appearance throughout this fic will be unavoidable. Also, certain opinions and views on these topics will be presented throughout this fic that you may not agree with or may cause discomfort, sensitivity, anger etc. Please note that these views are not necessarily that of the author's and are used for fictional purposes ONLY. 

NOTE: ALL EVENTS, CHARACTERS AND SETTINGS IN THIS FIC ARE PURELY FICTIONAL.


Other fics:

SehunxOC: Affair (completed), In Another Life (completed), In The Rain (completed)

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HlaMyia
#1
Chapter 21: You deserve an upvote for making me cry 😭 I'm glad I decided to read this or else I missed this gems 😭
poprocksgum
#2
Chapter 21: i cried so much at this chapter although i did think that it had to be this realistic uk even though its a fic. The fact that this is based on military and war, she was probably not going to survive seeing as how she isn’t fully trained that well. Even though the rest of the class was not fully trained as well, she was still lagging behind the others so when you put chaeyoung onto the battlefield…. >< the alternate ending is done really well though 🥺 the happy ending that sehun and chaeyoung deserve. A really nicely done fic!! I enjoyed it a lot 🥹🫶🏻
Overdose61
#3
Chapter 23: I cried 😣
tonnettie
#4
Chapter 23: Why on earth did I got so interested with military stories. It’s making me cry so bad
loveshineenexo
#5
Chapter 23: This is such a good fic!! I cried so hard at the first ending :'(( But I am so glad for the second ending, thank you so much for it!!
Baekkyoongja
#6
Chapter 23: Whoaaaa love the alternate ending.. ahaha am such a er for a happy ending.. thank you for the alternate ending tho. I was already bawling my eyes out ahaha
tonnettie
#7
Chapter 23: Too bad her brother can’t be found. But that’s the way they roll. This is beautifully written! How I wish there are more militaryau in the site.
Devon12345
#8
Chapter 22: i am glad i found your story it's really beautiful.. however don't you want to write a fic abou sehun after him being heartbroken? :) and about chanyeol after their mission? well i hope you can consider my wish :) i just wish that they have a happy ending...
silverrlight #9
Chapter 22: My heart hurts so much after reading the ending. Nonetheless, this story was beautifully written, definitely one of the best stories I read
silverrlight #10
Chapter 15: This chapter’s fluff made mY HEART BURST OHGOHD ><