기억을 따라 | Memories

Description

"I’m Jeon Jeong Guk.

And this is the story of my broken heart."

Foreword

hello, im back with another trash.

this is a Vkook historical AU fic, im also surprised at myself to be able to write a historical AU.

oh, anw this is a songfic of 기억을 따라 (Memories) by Super Junior. the song is so sad, so this fic is sad too.

vkook is one of my fav otp and i really enjoy my depressing time when i wrote this, so i hope you will enjoy this too! Pls give me feedback bc it means so much for me ♡♡

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heclgehog
#1
this story was rich in scenery description and internal feeling description. but the actual plot was thin and more so told than shown, therefore I felt for the couple, but not as much as I could have if their relationship and their real struggles have been fully described and shown rather than just assumed and implied based on their social standings. This kinda felt more like the final chapter of a long fic rather than a contained short story. Your writing style is good, but this story in particular needs improve to reach its full potential. It is a good start though. Keep going with new stories and plots, or come back to this one and add more if you want.