Red Flavor

Description

Kim Yerim is one of the best students in her year but even good students get tired of being 'the good kid' all the time. When an opportunity arises to go to a college party, she doesn't hesitate. That's where she meets a certain redhead, her evening becomes a whole lot more interesting than she could have imagined.

Foreword

Excuse me for any possible grammatical and/or spelling mistakes, my native language is not English. 

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CuddlesLove
#1
Chapter 1: this is an amazing story I love this story so much!!❤️
troopers88 #2
goooooofddd
MistressOfAngst
#3
Chapter 1: This was an absolute wondering story, I do agree with the timeline or whatever being a bit messed up at times. Like some moments I was like huh? But I was able to quickly catch on (so not a huge deal, but I guess you could figure out a way to divide it up?) I liked how it was a bit deeper like they didn’t meet and have and boom done. But it’s like they slowly progressed their “relationship” and the ending was just so cute! I was fangirling so hard lol thanks for writing Joyri <3
Icmck001
#4
Chapter 1: At first i was really confused with the timeline but as i read further, it reminded me of the movie 'Irreversible' where the timeline didn't make sense at first but as you go along it all eventually made sense (with the flashbacks and present events) :)

I like it!
X-ZERB_areia
#5
Chapter 1: its great ..... lets all stay innocent, shall we?? hahaahah
Kpop_fan21 #6
Chapter 1: I cant stop grinning after reading this.
wenderpfan #7
The story is great! Hope you improvise the way how to put the past and present.
crisvalencia
#8
Chapter 1: Ok. Nice plot. Love joyri. But, the timeline is kind of a mess, was that intentional? And there are some paragraphs that are backwards...if it was intentional maybe you could use something to separate the timelines? This has so much potential but its hard to follow. I hope i didnt sound like a .