Nigrum Cordis

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Nigrum Cordis :/ Black Heart

Coldness. Lack of feeling, ability to feel, or even 

the wanting to emphatise with or attempting to 

tune in on another person's pain or distress.

 

It Is a mistake for him.

A simple game that he played, set him and his crew in a cursed.

A game that he should have never played.

A cursed that they cannot run from. 

- Nicholas Jack / Sehun Nicholas -

 

A princess. That what she is. 

She is an independent, loving, humble, and a wise girl.

She would rather be in her room reading then trying a 

lot of dresses, meeting other princes and princess.

But, she is a troublemaker.

Always looking for trouble.

This time, she got herself in a biggest trouble that she can't run  away from.

- Princess Elizabeth Rose Jonathan -

Foreword

I will use 4 or more language for this story. English, Turkish, Greek and Latin. First of all, I want to apologized for my lack of grammar in English, and i'm sorry if there is a grammatical error when you were reading this story later. because all of the language that will be used in this story is not my mother language. i would be using a translator to translate them into selected language that i will used. because i thought that this language will fit with the theme of this story. Pirate. 

As i post this story, it would be my first story that i have ever posted in a web. i'm still new in writing. i hopes that people will enjoy reading this. i will try to update every weeks. and i hope that ypu can comment and tell me if there is anything wrong with my writing. Thank You.

*i'm changing his name from John to Jack

 

I have 2 main poster and i want to use both of them but i dont know how.. 

 

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FantasyDreamer88
the next reminder might be on the end of may... sorry... cause i'll go back to my college n I h've a lot of project and assignment report that I've to complete. sorry...

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theluckyone #1
Chapter 6: My second favorite pirate story!! I believe you can make it to the first!
vaynet #2
Chapter 4: enjoying this! take ur time with writing.
CSanWS
#3
Chapter 4: Well... i dont know if there is any grammatical error cause my eng is bad too..

For the new chapter i love it.. im so curious on what happen between the Prince and Madeline? And i love the scene where sehun pulled Rose towards him ??
YehetLover #4
Chapter 4: This fic is going good. I hadn't read a pirate fan fiction in a long time so yours caught my attention. I was not disappointed. Oh and your English is just fine. If there was a lot of mistakes I didn't notice because my brain automatically corrected it. Just keep going as you are, you are doing great. Trust me there are native speakers who make more mistakes. Take as much time as you need to update. Hwaiting author-nim!!! \^○^/
CSanWS
#5
Chapter 4: It's when something happen with your laptop.
Btw it's okay. And you don't have to be sorry cause it is not your fault in the first place. So yeah.. don't worry. Fighting~ authornim!
CSanWS
#6
Chapter 3: *i can't
CSanWS
#7
Chapter 3: i like how it start. and the part when her book fell in the ocean is so funny! she must be really angry. i'll wait for the next chapter. btw i read your author's thoughts. i think you just need to focus on posting this story. and i like the story. and i love the part about her book. so you dont have to think a lot. Good luck writing this!ncaqn't wait for the next update!! ;)
GlazedDounuts
#8
Chapter 2: This is an exciting story, I normally don't read this type of AU but it caught my attention, and am I glad! This is fantastic work so far, and when I read the disclaimer about writing in multiple of languages I thought 'damn, this is gonna be so dope, the author must be like a mega-mind' haha. I like the characterisation and how you introduced your characters, can't wait until the next update. :)