sayonara hitori

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Taemin is running away from home but on the way he meets a boy with eyes like burnt sienna that make him feel perhaps home isn't four walls but two eyes and a heartbeat. 

Foreword

Title: Sayonara Hitori 

Pairing: Taekai 

Genre: Flangst (I think)

Rating: NC-17

Word Count: 6.3k

Warning (s): violence, mental illness themes, alcoholism, , slight angst 

 

A/N: My first Taekai draft I feel confident enough to post. I hope you'll enjoy it and please don't hate me too much by the end of it :")

 

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N_Precious #1
Chapter 1: GIVE! ME! MOREEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS WAS TOO SWEET!!!!!!!!!!! Like not the beginning but from meeting Jongin onwards was so beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
misskimhee #2
Chapter 1: Omg finally i have time to read this fic >__< i've been willing to check this fic after i read your other fic. And , there's just so much emotions going on, even the slight felt so emotional. It would be great if you could write a sequel where taemin and jongin would meet again ;;;
babyprincess92 #3
Chapter 1: This is so full of many emotions...beautiful work!
Moonyki #4
Chapter 1: This was wonderful. Oh dear, I'm crying.
First, I would like to say that I adore your writing style. It's so soft and precise and poetic. And the sentence about Jongin's kiss tasting like sunshine was so adorable, I loved it so much. There's a melody in your words, for real, I love your sentences construction.
As for the story itself, it was heartbreaking and so moving. They were both so fragile and touching... I loved how Taemin could immediately feel Jongin's warmth both physically and emotionnally. I was sobbing when reading Jongin being mute; that's an idea I really like. Them having the infinity of few hours, and then Taemin leaving... it's so soft I just can't handle it. I'm overwhelmed with fluff and tears. You did an incredible job with this story.
I saw you're thinking about writing a sequel for this story and I just wanted to say, if you do, I'll definitely be there to read! Ah, I read your two stories tonight and I'm so glad I stumbled over your profile. Good luck with your next writings and I hope you'll continue to share it here ;u; ♥
Taemanhi #5
Chapter 1: This was so nice to read and I really loved how natural it seemed despite how they only knew each other for such a short period of time. The ending kinda broke my heart though sob they could be happy together, but Taem left. I hope you'll write the sequel, but this was still really good. And well written too! And I think it's just so difficult to find taekai fics that are actually good, so it was really refreshing to read this. Thank you!
rddenthusiast #6
Chapter 1: This was really beautiful, it had such charm to it. You're a really wonderful writer.
WhisperLucifer_ #7
Chapter 1: OMG my poor heart! This was so angst-y but so beautiful at the same time, the way Jongin's family took Taemin in without question and the way he and Jongin just gravitated towards each other so naturally ;;; I love how they helped ease each other's fears and you have a really nice writing style. The words you use are quite poetic in places ♡
I don't know why but I wasn't expecting that ending, like I really wanted Taemin to stay with Jongin but that note- *clutches heart again*
I really hope you write the sequel, it would be nice to see things from Jongin's perspective, too.
Thanks so much for this! ♡♡♡
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